Just A Review (OPEN)
#212 in random (10/12/17) #227 in random (10/11/17) #292 in random (9/27/17) I'm not a pro especially about rules but I will give my opinion on your story based on what I read as a whole. I may not be as detailed as I can be especially on technicalities but I'll try to share truthfully as to what I think about your wo...
