[CLOSED-ON-GOING] Lay's Critique Shop 2020 WARNING!!! Inconsistent updates, busy si Lay (busy ako), do not call me Author/Miss Author/Miss A. Lay na lang (pronounce it in Filipino pronunciation, hindi Ley, okay? Lay talaga iyan...). H'wag maattitude, natitrigger po ako sa ugaling ganyan. Hehehe. Thanks for coming into my shop!

Critique corner for filipino writers. Status: One Slot Left.

This is the part 2 of my JUST A REVIEW Shop before. I decided to make a new one and I hope you can visit my shop. I miss reading again so I will be accepting new stories here for my new reading list. So just like what I said in my previous shop, I'm not a pro especially about rules but I will give my opinion on your story based on what I read as a whole. I may not be as detailed as I can be especially on technicalities but I'll try to share truthfully as to what I think about your work. Just be patient because I really read your story and won't do skip reading. So matatagalan ako kapag mahahabang story na yong binabasa ko. So I expect na if magpapasa kayo ng story niyo dito, you are patient enough to wait for your turn. 11/26/2019

[Status: Shop is currently CLOSED. Come again for the making of version 2 soon] We offer you Arcane's Critique Shop! √Offering constructive criticisms and feedbacks. √Giving suggestions, corrections and advices to your work. √Neatness, Formality, Grammar.

Reviews/feedbacks from your judges are posted here.

(SPG/R-18) ❤️ Owl City Boys Series - 1 ❤ Adopted by a wealthy woman, Jyra Keith Aldrich life's changed. From a penniless, lost puppy, she is now a million-dollar worth lady that every man desires. Not just because of her name or a total package of an admirable lady. It is because she is VIKA. Even if she had all the fame, money and beauty, she's still not happy. Especially when Carla died. All the walls that she build crumbled. She lost the reason to live until her best friend Winona announced that she found her family. She felt envious of Winona, and Winona feels the same way too about her career and popularity. Both were aware of each other's dreams so they came into an agreement to exchange identity. Eaten by greed, Winona showed herself to the world as the face behind Vika without telling her friend of her plans. Then, a man came introducing himself as Vika's boyfriend. There was no surprise on Winona's face. It's as if she expected it to happen. While the real Vika stood on the side, confused. She asked her, "Winona, do you know him?" Shaking, she looked on the man's familiar physique. "How will I start a new life if my in erasable naked scar comes back?"

*Highest ranking received, number 1 in historical fiction.* Historical Romance Sabi nila, walang lihim na di-nabubunyag. Lumaki si Miranda sa gubat kasama ang kaniyang lola. Walang nakakaalam ng tungkol sa kaniya maliban kay Diego, ang binatilyong sinagip niya sa pagkalunod. Nangibang bansa si Diego matapos siyang itakwil ng ama. Obligasyon sa pamilya ang dahilan kaya siya'y umuwi. Sa kaniyang pagbalik, nakaharap niya si Miranda ngunit ito'y nakabalatkayong lola nito. Naalala niya ang bata sa gubat. Hinanap niya ito at nabigla sa nakita---isang maganda't inosenteng dilag na umakit at nagpasiklab sa kaniyang damdamin. Ngayon lang humanga si Miranda sa isang lalaki. Ngunit si Diego ay nakatakda nang ikasal. Sa kabila n'on, patuloy na nagniningas ang sensasyong kaniyang tinitimpi. Ginugupo n'on ang kaniyang katinuan. Maaangkin siya ng binata dahil sa init na sumi... SILAKBO

➖ CLOSED FOR ENTRIES ➖ JUDGING PHASE STARTS ON JUNE 9, 2018

#292 in Random (9-1-17) #345 in Random (8-30-17) Are you a newbie who wants to earn votes and comments for your story? Are you an aspiring writer who needs readers for your new story? Are you a writer who wants to know your readers feedback on your story? Then this lounge is for all of you because you will earn flood votes and serious comments by doing task in pairs or groupings. Come! join us and enjoy while you earn votes and comments for your work.

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