um.. hi this is my first thing ever I have posted on here, I would love some feedback, its just a poem. also, comment on what I should write about. 3/13/19: #6 in smile 8/25/19: #69 in simile
Uh.. aloha everyone, this is a story I've been working on. I was wondering if whoever reads this can give suggestions, for I am stuck at the moment. Anyways This is a story when two peasant twins get separated. The younger of the two is Crystal , she gets kidnapped by an upper class demon. Which means her older broth...