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A Race Against Death by Browneyed_Writer
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Previously Titled: Mafia's Witness I wanted to turn away but it was too late he pulled the trigger and I witnessed the bullet go straight through his head, splattering blood and ending the man's wailing. His eyes were cold and lifeless, and there was red liquid pouring out from the side of his gaping mouth and his head. My body felt numb and I could feel the bile rising in my throat as I fell back onto the cold hard pavement behind the dumpster. "There, that finally shut him up." the shadow said with an icy cold voice, slipping the gun back into his pocket. ________ Logan has finally returned to the station to find out that he has to watch over Julie when he'd rather be doing something that requires more of his skill. He didn't know how difficult it would be to keep an eye on Julie or how rebellious she is and realized she might be more trouble than she's worth. The last thing twenty-two-year-old Julie had expected was that she'd be a witness to a murder done by none other than one of the infamous gang leader Allen. With her life now at stake will she be able to survive with the help of Officer Logan? Highest Ranking: #344 in Action
Falling Skies by giki18
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No one expected the Sky Fall, the rapid disappearance of the stars before they crashed into Earth, rendering it useless. No one expected humanity to survive the burning blasts, to rebuild itself and fight with a strength that only the human race can. And no one expected what the Sky Fall would bring with it, an opening to a new world, a doorway allowing unspeakable creations to finally cross their way into Earth. Haven was created to expect the unexpected, a corporate laboratory who's only purpose is to reverse the effects of the Sky Fall and close the doorway for good. But how far are you willing to go to do the right thing? How do you destroy a monster without becoming one? (Is this edited on Google? Yes. Have I transferred that version here? No.)
Elusive Eternity by WoodNymphWarrior
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Eccentric phobias. Strange dreams. Unnatural premonitions. From a young age, Aveline Daher has learned to keep her secrets. But in a town which prides itself on perfection, differences can't remain hidden for long. After one of her premonitions draws a stream of unwanted attention and trouble, Aveline relentlessly pursues a fresh start. An opportunity to be ordinary. But when a bleeding stranger comes knocking at her door in the middle of the night, muttering about reincarnation and visions of death, Aveline realizes that being normal was never an option. __________ Cover Disclaimer: I do not own the original image.
His Dark Side by RahniaForever
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Evelyn Carter is a lonely and self centered girl but the loneliness doesn't bother her, the helpless girl in her nightmares does and when she befriends a mysterious stranger, her life changes forever. Despite the stranger's charm, there's something about him that she just can't figure out. He stays quiet and hidden. No one really knows who he is, all they know is his name. On top of it all, she's starting to suspect he might not even be human. Evelyn is determined to find the hidden secrets of his mysterious past. But Eric Clarke is determined not to reveal his dark side.
In a Weary World by NerissaMcC
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Hjalmar wants to make his fortune. Rigmor wants to break her curse. Solvej wants revenge. Now, if only they could do something about that pesky magician, they might get what they want. Cover by @_bluelle