*TRIGGER WARNING* Darren Mercy is sad, well thats not the word for it; he's sad, but not sad. He's numb. He's asked himself why, thousands of times. He has everything. Friends, a great mom, to some people he has the perfect life. He looks for some sort of reason to be sad, some reason to feel the way he does. ...
*MAY BE TRIGGERING* Ashely Thaum has always been the 'Chubby' one, ever since elementary when she just happened to be a few pounds heavier then the other kids. Her twin sisters seem to always be the preferred daughters. On Ashely's 14th birthday she took a wish of becoming skinny, but dreams only come true with hard w...
*TRIGGER WARNING* Bailey Hope just wanted to be like everyone else, Thin. She didn't realize what she was doing was as wrong as everyone treated it... After her mom had started working more, Bailey had more time for her new "hobby." Her friends didn't notice and so she never thought to stop... That is until Darren had...
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