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Hell and Heaven have been fighting over control on Earth since the beginning of time. Whoever wins this war gains the ability to manipulate Earth's human souls for eternity. Both Heaven and Hell have decided to search for the perfect solider for their army on Earth. Sadly, they have chosen the wrong people as their soldiers and they must convert them into strong warriors quickly. The solider that Hell has chosen is a 18 year old high school senior by the name of Mark Reed. Mark Reed will now have to work with Lucifer and his demon army to defeat Heaven but many challenges come his way. Ultimately, this war on Earth must come to an end, the question is who will be victorious? Cover by @pennyroyaltear

Ella Montgomery always wrote letters to her mother. Even four months after her mother's death, she still does. The only difference is, she doesn't get a reply. Until now. Noah Hunter is shy and sensitive. He hides his grief behind small smiles and hoodies. He is broken and haunted by his past. When Noah finds one of Ella's letters, he writes back. And everything changes. The darkest secrets will be uncovered. But will the truth tear Ella and Noah apart? Can they put each other back together?

A sequel to Family Comes First by Mason FitzGibbon After Carrie telling the detectives about the abuse Tommy put her through, a search is out for Tommy and Jimmy. Julie is trying her best to keep the family's traditions secret, but the detectives have been in the basement. She gets caught up in a web of lies and has to clear her name so that she isn't charged for murder. Jimmy wants Julie and Hunter back. Julie moves in with Carrie and she tries her best to suppress her anger toward Carrie. The story is told as a mashup of Julie and Jimmy's POV *The photo used for the cover is not mine. If anyone knows the photographer please message me*