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A Battle For Freedom by quinzenth
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Lugh is in the middle of a war. An advocate of peace, Lugh did not want anything to do with the battle but fate has other plans for him. The darkest of magical beings and those who despise magic to their very core are raging against each other, leaving behind a trail of flames and destruction, and Lugh is the one getting burnt.
Demon Deletion by UnitingTheUnique
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Schlinder, Tarek, and Wolf are assigned from the U.S Military to take Germany "Off the Grid" Cover by @Annax2x
The Ugly Truth by deyonce97
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Mia Porter has been missing for a year. Her disappearance has thrown the life of Lucy, her best friend, into turmoil. Unbeknownst to investigators, family and friends, Lucy has the unpublished manuscript of a book that Mia had been working on before her disappearance. Lucy soon realises that the book is more of an exposé than a piece of fiction, and that all was not as it seemed in their small close-knit college... "We're all liars. We all cheat. We're all capable of hurting those we love. That's just the ugly truth." Cover credits to @PurpleCiello1117
The Last Philosopher: Part One by NickfEast
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11x featured wattpad story. Before everything, it's assumed there was nothing, but what if there was no real difference between the two? Just two extreme philosophies from the first conflict. The planet Huom has been under observation for longer than should technically be possible. The primary watcher, a bitter black hole, is excited to see that there is finally a proverbial Darkness at the end of the tunnel. Meanwhile, on the planet, in the freezing mountains of Empris, Lyeasrakardsul, the oldest living sorcerer, suffers from devastating nightmares. At the same time, far away in the sandstone desert of Zenon, Herschel, a man filled to the brim with weird ideas is escaping a prison filled with strange old men. What does all this have to do with arsehole Gods, hairy Dwarfs, frustrated Afreets, curious Knomes, lizard-women, and nude Áettar? Perhaps Nothing, perhaps Everything... but why can't it be both?
The Abyss of War, Book One by Some_LoFi_Dude
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"They always tell us how much we've won. They never mention how much we've lost." In a nation gripped by bloody civil war that has raged for five years, Dayne must balance love, war, morals, and a troubled past, all while becoming the ultimate expression of the Empire's will on the battlefield. In a time of civil unrest, questionable military practices and the demands of a totalitarian government, stakes are high, the body count even higher. Failure is not an option. Note: Yes this is a BxB story. I do not own the pictures and music used in the story. All credit should go to the original artists and composers. Thank you. Story is completed and is undergoing editing. Swearing, Blood, Violence, Emotions, and Sarcasm are relevant. You have been warned. Beautiful Cover made by @elizaazoo!
Spies, Thieves, and Revolutionaries by insertafabuserhere
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All Dinah Ahmadi wanted was better living conditions for the people of her tribe. Instead, she got the chance of a merciless revenge. A chance that will turn her world upside down. Motivated by all the wrong reasons, Dinah revolts against the Crown. Desperate for help, she relies on a shady traveler, an exiled prince, and a retired prostitute turned brothel madam. She journeys the Empire with her band of misfits, meeting mysterious, mischievous creatures, and rallying troops for her cause. Guided by her flaming blood lust that will only be satisfied by the sweet nectar of revenge, Dinah awaits the day of judgement. The day the guilty will burn. Cover by @DrWidAA
Wildlings by theemmpress
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✨Watty Shortlisted!✨ In Albia, the poor are scum, and there's no scum worse than Exotic immigrants. Shy, studious Sannah MaVae is determined to make something of herself, escape the expected fate of a young Exotic. It's just a shame her wild little sister Judit doesn't feel the same way. Then one day, Sannah's world changes. Judit is snatched away, taken to live in the wilderness as part of a savage tribe for a scientific experiment. Now, Sannah must do everything she can to save her. As Sannah negotiates sex, drugs and the criminal underworld of the city in an attempt to find her sister, this means she must face some wildness of her own. Meanwhile, for Judit, life in the wilderness isn't the fight for survival she expected. It's a whole lot weirder than that... 🥇Undiscovered Writers Awards 1st🥇 💡💡Wattpad Featured Story💡💡 ⭐️Top rank: 14 in Adventure⭐️ ⭐️⭐️19 in Science Fiction⭐️⭐️ ✨Cover Art by @italychick; Aesthetics by @ifeelokayish ✨
Is Magic a Superpower? by jenny_the_writer
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A criminal from another world is exiled to Earth. Earth is so different from her own world because magic doesn't exist. It has been five years since she was exiled to Earth with no memories and her magic sealed away. What happens when her magic becomes unsealed and she has no idea how to control it? Check out the characters from my story in art books and random things https://www.wattpad.com/story/95570623-art-book-and-random-things Prologue co written with @Kerriimlay edited by @BookerTilton Book cover by @chaosinspace
Tide by -Jewels-
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Ava is a fifteen-year-old girl on holiday with her family and best friend. The day after Christmas, she and her relatives head to the beach, where a tsunami strikes and washes away everything in sight. With numerous injuries, Ava manages to pull through, but loses sight of her loved ones. Meanwhile, she must push aside her sorrow and find shelter with all of the other orphans, where she meets a boy named Isaac. Similar to Ava's situation, Isaac's parents are nowhere to be found. Together, they search frantically for their families in all the hospitals and shelters, and do everything to overcome the trauma the tide has brought them. Credit to the talented @errantce for the cover!
Finding Humanity by NinaMarks
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After escaping a stalled elevator into a zombie apocalypse, Emily must learn how to trust people again or risk losing everything in this terrifying world. ***** For Emily, every day of the last two years have been a blur. She keeps her head down, takes her college courses online, and only goes out to work at her mandatory internship. But all that changes on the day the office elevator breaks down, leaving her trapped when the screams begin. And when the doors finally open, revealing a dystopian world ruined by bloody teeth and disease, Emily is launched into a terrifying run for her life, caught between the strangers she's not sure she can trust and the man-eating monsters that hunger for her flesh. Now she must learn not only how to survive in this new and dangerous world, but also how to overcome her own inner demons before they cost her something more precious than her life. [[Wattys' Shortlist]] [[Promoted by AMC]] Content and/or Trigger Warning: The story contains some gore, violence, strong language, and dark themes. [[word count: 100,000-150,000 words]]