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|| Runaway Princess || by forthatgoodlife
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'THE TRUTH WILL ALWAYS REVEAL ITSELF TO THOSE WHO SEEK IT' ⭐ A HIDDEN PRINCESS AND AN ASSASSIN. An unlikely pair united together by chance, on a desperate search to find the truth. ⭐ Elaine Everett, princess of Daine, has spent her entire life confined within the walls of her father's palace. After discovering that her supposedly-dead sister was alive, she abandoned the comfort of the palace walls and immediately embarked on an anguishing journey to find her sister. Little did she know that the journey not only shows her the cruel reality of her world, but evidently changes her life forever - all with the help of a charming assassin. A story about hope, unimaginable courage, and love. Join Elaine on her journey to find her sister - and her true self. - Highest Ranking: #732 in Fantasy 15/10/2017 Updating regularly every TUESDAY and SATURDAY * cover by krisk-
The Damaged Young by -DairyQueens-
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Kylie Esperanza isn't very fond of anyone, anything, or even life itself. She doesn't have any friends, other than her mischievous locker neighbour Basil Brooks and his loveable best friend; Wesley Shepherd. Wesley's part of a support group that takes place in the school, where he deals with his personal issues and tries to help his over-populated, dysfunctional family. When Kylie's asked by a teacher to take part in the support group, she seeks Wesley's advice, and Bas quickly jumps in to say he'll take part in the support group if she's willing to. Agreeing, Wes guides Kylie and Bas to the school's support group, where they meet Jack, his smart mouthed brother, a blond girl with a bad attitude, and Summer; Wesley's infamous girlfriend. After weeks of helping each other and sharing their stories, Wesley Shepherd is suddenly murdered, along with his sister who is put into a long, deep coma in the process, both of them leaving behind zero traces of evidence on who did it. cover: @vampiresucs