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Dreams To Pursue by A_Crazy_Heart
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With the end of the semester coming the question rises once again. How many people will quit their passion of writing and how many would work for it? How many people will let society cut off their writer's wings and how many would roam freely not getting caught in the chains of society? Maya, a writing teacher with a burning passion of writing still inside her is forced to view the answers of the question each year and unfortunately for her more then half of the students get caught in the chains of society. But this year she is more than determined to make society lose, to make the students roam freely with their writer's wings, so far, they are beyond society's reach. Your writing is not good enough, this is what society is maybe trying to show you, but Maya wants to show you that you are not writing for them but for you. You can do whatever you want but still be free with your wings spread wide. this is what Maya wants to show. And to see how she does it, you may read on. Because this story is for every writer who is on the verge on giving up or maybe has already given up. This is to show you your dreams are worth fighting for. Don't give up. Go on.
Started with a Pizza  by tatteredhearts
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For Christina Glenn, life couldn't be more tedious. Delivering pizza's for her uncle's pizzeria "Cho's Crust" and coming back to a home with only a cat named, Sox to care for, life can become really lonely. Though on a day, when she is to deliver a pizza to an unsavoury looking house in a somewhat busted up neighbourhood, her tedious and unexciting life somehow becomes a little less boring and a lot more adventurous. 468 | ADVENTURE Copyright©2017 by Maxine.
Mr. Jerk Calling... by salraD
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"Hello?" I spoke first. "Natalie is this you?" other voice on the phone asked. It was husky and smooth at same time, the voice of the person. It definitely must be a guy. "Yeah, May I know who this is on the other side?"I asked gently, not being rude, as I was not in one of my great moods. "You will know eventually babes." I could feel him smirking on the phone. "Just called to wish my future fiancé a very happy birthday because its 12:00 now." To say I was too shocked, would be an understatement, because I was literally freaking out. ✴✴✴✴✴ 'Who must be that stranger?Lover or...?' Checkout the what happens after this unknown call changes Natalie's life ....................................................... NOTE :- THE TITLE "STARTED WITH A PHONE CALL " IS CHANGED TO " MR. JERK CALLING... " so story is still the same.... Do check out my first story hope you like it! Tap in to read the typical love story with an unusual twist. ⚠ LANGUAGE ALERT ⚠ Usage of some swears ..