This is about how to improve your OC so that it's not too Mary Sue/Gary Stu. It also looks into tropes and cliches, overall helping with storytelling. OC reviews are also welcome for those that want their OCs to be checked. (OC REVIEWS ARE CLOSED) Note: Some chapters are very outdated!! I only just started updating some parts of them but I'll try to edit when I can. (Edited up to tip #7) Cover art by 薯子Imoko (ID: 1950701) on Pixiv Render by Saelyaz on DeviantArt Highest Ranking: #2 in Mary Sue 30/9/18 and #1 in advice 23/8/21

This book contains -Words to use instead of said, says, went, etc -Personalities -Characteristics - words to describe movement, looks, body language and more. and a whole lot of other things.

𝙒𝙍𝙄𝙏𝙄𝙉𝙂 𝙃𝙀𝙇𝙋. i get by with a little help from my friends! lowercase intended.

fuck kishimoto what the characters needed was therapy NOT love interests pro-sasuke (bby boy 😭) pro-sakura (my wife💓 ) pro-karin (😭😭ily bby) anti-ending pro-narusasu pro-narusaku pro-sasusaku pro-sakuino fuck canon im multishipping

It's my fitst story so I hope you like it. ¿Don't hasted you can leave comments so I can read and sea what wrong? My story is gonna be just like in the manga but not 100% it will be 50 - 50 have some few changes. Good Orochimaru and he will have a evil brother name Torochimaru. Evil Danzo, elders, and Civilian New village and the New village of whirlpool. Team minato are alive and good obito and Rin alive. Team 7 have Aunt and Cousins survived before the massacre clan and they escape.

Wattpad is like a dysfunctional family that seems to have a family gathering all year round... And some of them write stories. What I'm trying to say is that there are many types of people on Wattpad and some of them are pretty funny.

a book about everything. not a fanfiction, but something regarding fan culture and relating to the naruto universe. just my thoughts on a lot of things. a world-building rant book, if you will.

Stop. Seriously, just stop with all these cliche's. Don't write these please. I beg of you, stop all of the repition. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ *POSSIBLE RANT WARNING* ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ All of these entries are my personal opinions. I'm not forcing them on you. If you don't agree with them then stop reading this. Don't send me hate if our opinions are different. Please keep any negativity OFF of this book altogether. Everyone has opinions and I understand that, but this book is about MY opinion on things I find cliché about Naruto fanfics. You disagree, alrighty, stop reading it. You don't need to tell me that "I'm wrong" or that you disagree in the comments. I will delete negative and disagreeing comments. It's not as a rude gesture or me saying your opinion doesn't matter. It's me doing what's best for myself mentally. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ That is all!