Books for Critiquing
6 stories
When the Day Ends by BrooklynnSmith
When the Day Ends
BrooklynnSmith
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  • Parts 5
I watch the rain fall hopelessly to the ground. What will my life become after this last year in high school? There is finally a speck of hope glimmering in my life, but I know if I hold it to close, I will lose it. Mr. Brooks is the new substitute teacher for Mrs. West ( who recently got into an accident). He is one of the most caring yet stubborn person i've met, but I can't have feelings for him, he is a teacher. Anyways he wouldn't have feelings for me, would he? UNDERGOING EDITING
The mysterious disappearance of Luke Friend by Harry_SBungalow
The mysterious disappearance of Luke Friend
Harry_SBungalow
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  • Parts 29
Everyone went home to The X Factor house buzzing after performing live on TV for millions of people.. everyone except Luke. Luke never returned. With the x factor crew in hot water and the fans demanding answers, what will happen? Will they manage to find out what happened to Luke? Does someone whose right under their nose know something they're not telling? Find out! >> Mystery/Thriller fanfic of X Factor 2013 contestant Luke Friend. Enjoy! :)
Me, Her, and the Boys by FrozenPhoenix
Me, Her, and the Boys
FrozenPhoenix
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  • Parts 4
The New Millenium by LaurenCrunchieTalbot
The New Millenium
LaurenCrunchieTalbot
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  • Votes 74
  • Parts 8
Ever thought of what life for women would be like after your time? In the new Millenium, the year 3000, girls are oppressed by men. From birth they are placed into instiutions where every women is brainwashed into believing that they are subjected and possessions of men- that they are owned by men. In a world where women are forced to live in a patriarchal society they aren't exposed to the dangers of the world we know today. The only women who stand a chance are those who reproduce 'infant men'. If you give birth to a male you are taken to a sanctuary where you are treated like a Queen and your every need it catered for. Tianna, one of the many young girls enrolled at the institution, is wanting to be pregnant so she can have a chance to go to The Sancturary. But how can a girl who beat the system and experienced the real world settle into a conformitive institution, forget her own feelings, emotions and inabitions? How can a girl ignore her feelings and not fall in love?
A Life Of poverty by themindthatspeaks
A Life Of poverty
themindthatspeaks
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  • Parts 12
There was a body in a casket, Stiff and still, The man inside the casket had no pulse or never will, My mother stood by there for five whole minutes, She whispered theses words I will never forget, I will always love you, I knew she saw her life go away, He was her world that she just said goodbye, A room full of people who could care less, Along with the man and his famous index cards, We head outside to see a piece of wood that means more than words could, However his name is misspelled, Damn the man with his famous index cards with in hands reach, Here the man in the casket was once was the father of a girl who I no longer am, He is a father of a girl who always wears a smile not one who is on the verge of A mental brake-down, He is a father of another family, One with a mother who is the reason they came up with the word sunshine, The girl with the younger sister who she looks out for, Not a younger sister who looks out for the older one, His body is now in the ground that has a plank over the spot, A name that is not my fathers because the story has changed, A family with no father, A mother who they created the word deppesion for, A older sister who is a child at most, A girl who is stronger than both, This time his name read off Edggar Finch, A guy who I never knew, My father was named Edgar Finch they most of had the wrong name. See for yourself it's all a cruel joke, Until I remember the body I saw in the casket, They had the right person just the wrong name.
Summer Road Trip by PrettyinPink
Summer Road Trip
PrettyinPink
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  • Votes 10
  • Parts 3
It's the summer of 2013 and most teenagers would be going to the beach, getting wasted, traveling, or just spending time with family. Meet Corinna Barosse. She's your typical average 17 year old high school girl. She's smart, pretty, and very sociable. Days before summer break she finds out she's adopted. Her life spirals downwards and leaves her with many un answer questions. She decides on going on a self discovering expedition to New York to find her birth mother. She has her mind set on finding who her birth mom is and she wants answers. Meet Ashton Lennox. He's basically your typical bad boy. He's the arrogant kid that everyone just adores. After being blackmail into driving Corinna to New York, he has a plan to annoy the crap out of Corinna. What's the harm of putting two complete opposites in the same car for possibly the longest road trip ever?