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WHERE AM I?!?! I whine as the little girl looks at me with a smile. I swallow and my voice comes out with a creak. "Wh-where am I???" The girl walks over, "HI! I'm Storm!!" She giggles and I look at her with wide frightened eyes. She unbinds me from the bed and I sit up, rubbing my wrists. She smile with shining eyes. "YAY! YOU'RE JUST LIKE ME!!!" She giggles and I freeze. "J-just like Y-you?" I ask, afraid of the answer. She nods her head excited. "Yeah a wampire!!!" That's when I gulp and jump up, running outside. My skin starts to burn and turn blotchy red, with blisters and blood.