Stories I'm Critiquing At The Moment
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These Broken Wings by Lorelei01
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Mya Schmitt is like any other sixteen year old girl, she gets good grades, attends public school and loves music. She also hides a dark and painful past as well as a secret too personal to share with her closest friend. Her life is like a nightmare, stained with blood and pain and destruction but when a boy from out of town interferes with her life in ways she can’t even imagine will she be able to keep the secret she's kept hidden for so long? A/N: After much thought and consideration I have decided that this story is going to be the first story I complete. Because of this I must Re write it. I will post what I can but please know that I am trying my best as an amateur writer. This also entails that this story is subject to change, a lot of it. Please be patient. Thank you for your time. -Leona (Lorelei01) cover credits to @KatieBirdos at Lazy Cat Graphics
The Companion's Guide by OnTrashMostOf
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I've just been attacked by a very angry statue and for some reason the houses have devolved into something out of the 19th century... [Doctor Who Fanfiction - Set between 'The Angel's Take Manhattan' and 'The Snowmen' - All rights to the BBC and whatnot - Know nothing about The Doctor? That's ok - WARNING: "The Guide" contains SPOILERS for anything in the series, Classic and Revived]
Summer Road Trip by PrettyinPink
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It's the summer of 2013 and most teenagers would be going to the beach, getting wasted, traveling, or just spending time with family. Meet Corinna Barosse. She's your typical average 17 year old high school girl. She's smart, pretty, and very sociable. Days before summer break she finds out she's adopted. Her life spirals downwards and leaves her with many un answer questions. She decides on going on a self discovering expedition to New York to find her birth mother. She has her mind set on finding who her birth mom is and she wants answers. Meet Ashton Lennox. He's basically your typical bad boy. He's the arrogant kid that everyone just adores. After being blackmail into driving Corinna to New York, he has a plan to annoy the crap out of Corinna. What's the harm of putting two complete opposites in the same car for possibly the longest road trip ever?
Audrey Hepburn's Pearls: Part I by SumireHime
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Part one of two. In 1967, George was the legendary Georgina Monroe, the best Marilyn Monroe drag impersonator New York City had ever seen. But in 1994, George is a recluse who is scared of everyone and everything. Enter Ruiz, a young Latina pageant drag queen known as Audrey the Ritz, famous for her Audrey Hepburn impersonation. Since she was fourteen, she had admired Georgina Monroe's career obsessively, always wondering about why she disappeared so suddenly. During a chance encounter, Ruiz gets to meet George, and through a gentle friendship and a strong bond, Ruiz starts to uncover a story she never could have imagined in her worst nightmares. Stories of the mob, glamour, love, heartbreak, addiction, murder,and intensely dangerous secrets abound in this lgbt novel about ever present issues that pervade throughout time. Told through voices young and old, we follow the story of Georgina and Ruiz as witnesses to truths that are rarely told.