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Escape «bts» | ✔ by bearhug-
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Shin Jin Jin and Shin Jin Hee's father and 10-year-old brother had been killed in a battle. You see, these girls are not any normal girls you see on the street. They came from Pluto. And yes, they're not all that different looking from normal girls and their names are really normal-sounding too. BUT. To differentiate the people that came from Pluto, look at their eyes. Their eye colors changes from time to time. Anyway, back to the story. Jin Jin and Jin Hee are the twin princesses of Pluto. So, I'm sure you know who their father was. SO now that Pluto had lost their only king to the terrorists from an unknown realm, their world is in chaos. The twin's mother, the queen of Pluto, was worried for her precious daughters and so evacuated them to the human world. She enrolled them into a boarding school, DCTH School, where the principal is their very own human uncle. He was the only one who knew about them being 'outsiders' and realizing their problems, he let them study at the school on a scholarship. [DCTH means Dreams Come True Here] What would happen when the girls meet some guys who seem interested in their life? Will love blossom or betrayal happen? What dark secret lies behind the whole happy-go-lucky situation at school? Read on to find out... --- All Rights Reserved to @bearhug- .[Fifth Story] None of the medias used are mine, unless stated. Copyright, and credit all medias used to original owners.
Twisted Desire by beckyboo11
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Amelia never knew her parents, all her life she's grown up in her uncle, the duke's castle with his wife Eliza. While she's always been grateful for her upbringing , she's never really felt like she truly belonged. She's always wanted a life outside the confines of the castle walls. One night at a ball held in the castle she meets the Devitt's, a wealthy family who had just moved into their village. Right away , they stood out from everyone else. From the minute the Devitt's entered their ballroom, Amelia's life began to change drastically. With the Devitt's come secrets and revelations that force Amelia to question everything...and everyone. ~Looking for a fun, easy read type story with twist and turns that keep you guessing? An eighteenth century vampire storyline perhaps?? A vampire style 'pride and predjudice' take on things? Then look no further ;)