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Cross на NerissaMcC
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(Formerly called "Vampiru") Enniskillen, Northern Ireland, 2012. When Dani Tamari sees a spaceship while stargazing, her life will never be the same again. Suddenly, she finds herself in a world of aliens, vampires, and people who want to kill her. The so-called David Cross doesn't regret killing his abusive father; he's happy he's finally gone. But the authorities on Vampiru, his home planet, don't see it that way, and now he's on the run. He chooses Earth to hide, and lands in Enniskillen. He doesn't know there are unpleasant surprises waiting for him. Dani and David find their lives a mess as their worlds collide with disastrous consequences. Dani doesn't know what she's getting into, and she wouldn't want anything to do with it if she did. But she's in too deep, she knows too much, and there's no way out. Cover by @Shady234
Errand Runners на Next_JK_Rowling
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[Check out BOUNTY HUNTERS, the sequel to Errand Runners] Unlike the other criminals in Nova City, Nole Vale has a curfew. While most civilians just want to survive in their crime-ridden, gang-infested city, this sixteen-year old is determined to conquer the city streets and provide for his brother and sister by any means necessary. But after crashing into a mysterious teenager, Nole is suddenly accused of a crime he didn't commit and his stable way of life begins to crumble. With the help of a diverse, yet peculiar group of teenagers, he must navigate his way through lethal gangs, brutal City Enforcers, and a corrupt city system in order to clear his name and keep himself and his siblings alive. Cover by @sequester All rights reserved. All material in this book (Errand Runners), and everything on this account is, unless otherwise stated, the property of the owner, creator and author of this work (@Next_JK_Rowling). Copyright and other intellectual property laws protect these materials. Reproduction or retransmission, in whole or in part, or in any manner, without the prior written consent of the copyright holder is a violation of the Copyright, Patents and Design Act of 1988 law and is punishable by law.
Moon Girl (Watty Awards 2013) на MissStyrieGurl
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EVERYONES TALKING ABOUT IT!! "A brilliant book with a strong female character. It is beautifully written. Definitely, a breath of fresh air." - flying-person (Author of "He Was Looking for a Princess Instead He Found Me" and "The Art of Courting") "With so many new books coming in every day it's hard to find one that gives us (readers) something new and interesting. Moon Girl is just what we've been waiting for!!" -Wordsareriddles (Watty Award Winning author of "My Redemption" and "The Dead Never Come Back") No walking The street sign was still flashing no walking. Some wondered if it ever would have happened if she had only obeyed the sign. No one could have for told it not even the greatest among them. She was the greatest and even she didn't see it coming. How could she? It was her blind spot. Everybody has a blind spot. No, I'm not talking about the blind spot in your eyes, though everyone has those too. I'm talking about your blind spot, the things that you refuse to see. For example, we all know that we're not supposed to steal, yet everyone does it at least once in their life. Or if your lactose intolerant but not terribly, so you still eat ice cream every once in a while. Your blind spot is the thing you do even though you know you shouldn't. It's the things you do without seeing the consequences or just outright ignoring them. This was her blind spot, and a very dangerous one at that.
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Audrey Hepburn's Pearls: Part I на SumireHime
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Part one of two. In 1967, George was the legendary Georgina Monroe, the best Marilyn Monroe drag impersonator New York City had ever seen. But in 1994, George is a recluse who is scared of everyone and everything. Enter Ruiz, a young Latina pageant drag queen known as Audrey the Ritz, famous for her Audrey Hepburn impersonation. Since she was fourteen, she had admired Georgina Monroe's career obsessively, always wondering about why she disappeared so suddenly. During a chance encounter, Ruiz gets to meet George, and through a gentle friendship and a strong bond, Ruiz starts to uncover a story she never could have imagined in her worst nightmares. Stories of the mob, glamour, love, heartbreak, addiction, murder,and intensely dangerous secrets abound in this lgbt novel about ever present issues that pervade throughout time. Told through voices young and old, we follow the story of Georgina and Ruiz as witnesses to truths that are rarely told.
Grim ON HOLD на euphoric_
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Henry Taylor had it all: a great family, friends and his dream job. That was until the day he dropped dead thanks to an aneurism. Now faced with death Henry is given a choice. Take his chances on the other side or continue his life, but everything comes at a price. While Henry would technically be alive he would be forced to leave his perfect life behind and become a Grim. A supernatural creature that works for the Grim Reaper collecting the souls of the dead. And what happens when Henry meets Emma the beautifully charismatic Grim next door who isn't afraid of anything. Anything except her growing feelings for Henry that is.
Newborn на TheSomberBison
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An ancient demon is born into a human body without any memory of its true self. Now, Anne Halton must figure out who she was and fight for the right to choose who she wants to be. Warning: lesbians, demons, fire, and foreplay. Note: The image in the title page is called "Gadjee" and it's by an awesome french artist called T.O.N.E. - check out some of his other work here: https://www.pinterest.com/pin/220254237996241788/