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Sweet embace by E.Braden by lizzie29
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Laura is a bright ,interesting,and humble girl but one day all that changed . She no longer did any activity at school and didnt even hang out with her friends only one which is Tess. She had trouble at home an had to deal with the kids at school. No one know her pain and the late nights she cried herself to sleep an wanting to be held,kissed and in someone embrace. That was about to changed when Tyler walk into her class an into her life. Will she be able to let him in. Truly give her heart away that she has protected so long or would he break her heart like everyone in the past.
Getting Over Charlie Miller by EmmaOsborne7
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Break ups suck, everyone knows that. But they suck even more when your ex just refuses to be forgotten... Louise and Charlie had the perfect relationship. They were that cute couple that could never stay mad at eachother; the couple that seemed like they were made for each other; the couple that should have stayed together for a very long time... until a single phonecall ended everything. Surrounded by people that are in healthy relationships, all Lou wants to do is to get over him. But he's always there: she doesn't read his Facebook messages, she ignores his calls, she deletes his texts. He shows up outside her school and speaks to her at every chance he gets. She can't get him out of her head and he refuses to dissapear. Lou's starting to realise that getting over Charlie Miller is a frustratingly difficult task.
Consumed by risingtide
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An amnesiac with no sense of identity and an ex-soldier running from a guilty past are driven into joining forces in order to survive. On the run from a deceitful ruler, and with war brewing in the air, their only choice is to follow the footsteps of those who have never returned into the unknown.
3 Months by Itn3v3erends
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"You have three months to get Cade Adams to fall in love with you. Or the secrets out" This is how myself life sucks. Jasmine Scott. Always seems to try to ruin my life. April May June I have those three months to get Cade to love me till graduation. And I have no clue how I'm going to do it. Zoe Evans, a complicated girl, with too many difficulties in her life. She is a girl of dreams, but soon enough that all comes crashing down. When Jasmine Scott, the 'popular' girl of the school, threatens to spill a secret of the entire school, how long will it really take for Zoe to make Cade fall in love with her? How can she, when she may already like someone else? But Cade has too many secrets, and so does her crush.
The Girl Behind The Mask (Undergoing editing) by paintdblue
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Never judge the girl without knowing her background. She's been through more than what most have. Her mask just something to show what society wants to see. A broken soul hiding behind a cheerful mask. ♢♤♡♧☆ This is not your typical quiet girl who falls for the bad boy. This is not your typical fairy tale of a girl and a boy who found something in each other. This is Sannie's story. She's your normal girl going through the hurricane of emotions in the bottle called college. But that is her when her mask is on. When her mask is not on, you don't see Sannie anymore. The girl without her mask on is called Sannyial. She's broken. She's hurt physically and emotionally. But Fate likes to be cruel to Sannyial. Fate tortured her. Fate deprived her of the thing she needs the most. Fate took Love away from her. But would Sannyial find Love and keep it? Or will her broken soul break before she could grasp Love in her hands? Read to experience the crazy, unexpected roller-coaster with Sannie as you go through her tornado called life. -This is a romance novel, not about a girl who goes though pure hell, so please don't be discouraged by the few starting sentence or the title!- ~Thanks for giving my book a shot, it mean the world to me <3
one by one by project_mayhem
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❝ the s t a r s fill the sky, and their light shines down. but all i see is y o u. ❞ letters, from someone hopelessly in love to someone blissfully unaware of the world reached #97 short story and #455 romance
Evasion {PUBLISHED/PREVIEW} by AuthorFarahK
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Evasion ( Away Series #1 ) - PUBLISHED Aria Louise Smith is young, beautiful and courageous but she's trapped. She's been trapped inside the walls of what she calls the house of hell for over ten years and all she's ever wanted was to escape. One night, she did. For the first time, she made it out. She knew her aunt wouldn't involve the police in her disappearance so she tries to start a new life. Although she knew she had to go back for the sake of her father's years of hard work, she lives in the moment, while the freedom she's been so obsessed on feeling lasts. She thinks she won't be found, but she has no clue about what she'll be facing, or who.
Vagabond by minalovesmaine
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Everyone has a destination. A place they see themselves within five years, or even ten. Ingrid Bellamy believes there is no place where she truly belongs. A study abroad trip brings her much closer to her past than she had expected. An inter-connected journey filled with clues and puzzles will suddenly all fit together as she discovers what has been waiting for her on the other side of the Atlantic Ocean. She has no idea what she is in for.