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Love Infinity by red_diarygirl
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Ehliana Knight, she is not your typical girl. Sure she loves to hangout with her best friends but there’s lot more to her than anyone can see apart from her best friend Xualeah . She is interesting yet complicated , a girl with anger issues , who knows nothing about Love and yet has a whole different persona that she never lets anyone see. Ehliana has always been a bit shy around the people she doesn’t know but with her closest friends , there is no one as crazy as her . While all her life she has stayed in that little friends bubble of her , the group decided to take on the lead on the popular crowd of the St.Martin high but she wasn’t sure of what’s coming her way . Until on the first day of junior year , when a new transfer student Noah Hemmington laid his eyes on her , that moment just clicked and he made sure to add make this girl fall in love with him on his to-do-list. Sure he made her fall in love with him and vice-versa but will he be able to face the consequences of breaking the heart of that one girl who became the love of his life . Will Ehliana ever be able to let go of her first true love and move on , or will the Bad boy Colton Hayes be able to steal her heart away ? Can someone fall in love again as hard as the first time ? Only true love can beat true love. Find out what destiny has planned for Ehliana Knight as she goes through love , jealousy , hatred and what not .
Silent Lover by Laina_Barr
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To the Edge and Back by Blackbelt250
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It starts out as a normal morning for Nathan Turner until his undead uncle tries to kill him. After that, Nathan's life and the lives of those around him turn into a fight for survival. They must survive the hordes of psycho undead creatures and even worse, other humans. Nathan's mind leads him to the idea that he must find the source of all this madness and end it without he and his band of misfits dying along the way.
You Love Me? by Jordannnnn130
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River and Luna have known each other for 13 years. They know every secret about each other. River (being a normal 18 year old boy) starts developing feelings for Luna. Is it time to step up their relationship or will someone get in the way?
The God-daughter by KathrineMountgumary
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Hidden Girl by floatinginwords
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How a teen girl or an inexperienced lover may feel towards the strong feeling of love and trust