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ROGER [Wattpad Version] by veelozada
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[Book 1 in the CODES series] || Clara is stubborn and installs Roger, an AI program, inside her head in the most unconventional way, but because she's severed Roger's ties to his data, Clara is the only free citizen within a city that wants her mind... and her soul. ** In 2102, after the fall of separate nations, the world stands unified and equal. Under the Province, citizens know only the perfection the Government has to offer. And that's the only world Clara knows; simplicity and technological bliss. So, when Government officials announce the VF program, equipped with the highest artificial intelligence science has to offer, she is all for it. Who wouldn't want a computer assistant that not only takes care of your everyday needs, but is meant to be your bestest friend, too?It sounded as perfect as Province made life out to be. But all good things come with a price. What no one knew about the program meant to mimic the human mind, was that it wanted the human soul. Because no utopia can be built on truths, and no amount of sublimity can cover lies. Clara's only means of survival is the one rogue VF in her mind: Roger. ** | Completed | Exclusive to Wattpad ** featured: 💥 @Speculativefiction - A Crack In The System highest rankings: 💥 #43 in Science Fiction! 4/24/18 💥 #1 in Cyborg 6/16/18 💥 #27 in scifi-fantasy 8/04/18 💥 #1 in Artificial Intelligence 8/04/18 💥 #19 in Cyberpunk 11/29/20 * Awards: ⭐ 2nd Place in Science Fiction -- 2018 The Stella Luna Awards ⭐ 1st Place in Science Fiction -- Cognition Awards 2018 ⭐ 3rd Place in Science Fiction -- The 2018 Flavored Awards ⭐ 1st Place in Science Fiction -- 2nd Annual Ohana Awards ⭐ 2nd Place in Science Fiction -- 2018 Annual Medley Awards
Terminally Abstract by FoggySea
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🤩1st PLACE WINNER OF THE FRUIT AWARDS 2018!!🤯 (From awards category)(*^ω^*) ON HOLD FOR PT. 2 ESKETITTT "Different is good sometimes." In the year 2130 nothing could surpass the most technological state in the world, California. A microchip, implanted into one's mind after graduation, limits a person's emotions, creativity, and intelligence; leaving the state helpless. Of course, there will always be a counter to a technical mind. An abstract one. Michael and his best friend Arthur will either cower or stand in the face of society's expectations, with the year span slimming before becoming high school graduates. However, Michael is dealing with more than what meets the eye, trudging through his own internal life.🧠🗣 Highest ranking! #21 in philosophical #13 in LBGTQ #70 in bxblove #50 in mental!
Skiathos || 2018 Wattys Shortlist - Sample Chapters by mhunyadi
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|| Sometimes in Space Things Disappear || Nadja Bikram traveled to the distant and alien world of Skiathos to work one problem, a puzzle that had vexed her for seven years. But on reaching the savage desert world, she found the planetary survey team she was to join in disarray and its leader missing. It was up to her to take command and to sort things out, but she swiftly discovered the harsh and brutal planet held a hidden danger, one so lethal and dreadful that it threatened them all. Nadja would need to use her every wit and to risk her life and the lives of those around her to find out what it was. But would she find the answer before it was too late? 2018 Wattys Shortlist || Magic Awards 1st Place in Science Fiction
Tell No One... by GwenevierjonesEhimen
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Songs of the wise drunk owl... Who traveled the sea and lived a life filled with adventures and finally comes home to tell the tales of what its eyes have seen... A secret he told the deaf and a picture he showed the blind. Witnesses to his sin, he's set free for though he shared his secrete, he's sure of what their answer will be. Nothing..... This is an unusual story to humanities race. A fight to keep love and a desire to rule hell. A story that must not be told might be the truth behind humanity's woes. This is a story of humanity's quest to rule hell. Tell No One!. WARNING ⚠️⚠️⚠️⚠️⚠️⚠️ PG18, mature content, sexual, bloody.
Serenade by JJRothschild
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⭐️A WATTPAD FEATURED STORY⭐️ Completed! ✅ Darkness comes to Earth and unexpectedly finds his unborn, human soulmate. Join Lark, a winged, fanged, all-powerful god and future King of The Order on his journey as he breaches the unknown gap between his superior kind and the much despised, lowly human race. Love, life, and many unique challenges and tribulations ensue while he takes on the extremely tricky task of raising his soulmate. For him, there is no choice, but will Bronwyn choose him in the end or her human life? Will their serenade ever begin? 🥇1st Place Fantasy/Sci-Fi Winner of The Chaos Awards 2 🥇1st Place Fantasy Winner of The Wicked Awards 🥇1st Place Vampire Winner of The Golden Awards - (Perfect 80/80 score) 🥇1st Place Fantasy Winner of The Snowflake Awards 🥇1st Place Fantasy Winner of The Monthly Queen Awards 🥇1st Place Fantasy Winner of The Star Blazer Awards 🥇1st Place Fantasy Winner of The Literary Awards 🥇1st Place Fantasy Winner of The Sunset Awards 🥇1st Place Fiction Winner of The 2018 Rise Awards 🥇1st Place Fantasy Winner of The Magical Awards 2018 🥇1st Place Adventure Winner of The Crazziest Wins Awards 🥇 1st Place Fantasy Winner of The Wattpad Wonder Contest 2018 🥈2nd Place Sci-Fi Winner of The Shooketh Awards 🥈2nd Place Fantasy/Sci-Fi Runner Up of The Phoenix Wars 🥈2nd Place Horror/Paranormal Winner of The Breathtaking Awards 🥉3rd Place Sci-Fi Winner of The Phantom Awards 🥉3rd Place Sci-Fi Winner of The Runaway Awards 🥉3rd Place Fantasy Winner of The Flower Awards 🥉3rd Place Fantasy Winner of The Sunshine Awards 2k18 🏆Named "Unique & Original", "Best Male Character", & "Host's Favorite" at The Flower Awards ⭐️Rated #1 in Monster, #1 in Unique, & #1 in Explicit, & #1 in One of a Kind by Wattpad
Falling for a Mudblood |Dramione| by _LibraChild_
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Winner of: The Car Awards The Chaos Awards (1st prize) The Hidden Gems Awards (1st prize) The Red Rose Awards (1st prize) The Magical Awards (1st prize) The Athena Awards (2nd prize) The Proximity Awards (2nd prize) Diamond Star Awards (3rd Prize) The Talent Awards (3rd prize) The Sunset Awards (3rd prize) The Poe's Awards (5th prize) The Colouring Awards (Honourable mentions) The Sunset Awards (best cover in fan fiction) (^_^) "Enjoying the view, Granger?" He asked as a smirk formed on his face. This brought Hermione back from admiring-Malfoy mode. It took less than a moment for the quick-wit Granger to show up. "Don't flatter yourself Malfoy. I would rather gaze into an Orb than to look at you." She stated in a matter-of-fact tone. As she was about to turn away, she heard Draco muttering "Filthy mudblood." Instead of walking away from him, as always, she stepped towards him, lifted her heels, brought her lips closed to his ear and whispered, "You wish you knew how filthy I really am.." •••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••• Disclaimer: All characters rightfully belong to the amazing JK Rowling. After the war all the students were called to complete their last year, seventh year, but none knew that this year would turn Hermione's and Draco's life upside down. They both developed a feeling for each other, other than hate. But there's a twist. They are the worst people on planet to really admit their feelings. How will they be together? How will they admit their love to one another? Read to find out!
Johnlock: The Prince and His Personal Guardian by CarrieGChandler
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This story is a Fanfiction Johnlock Alternate Universe. Young Prince John & his new Personal Guardian, Sherlock, grow up together, grow together & find love together. John learns to rule his kingdom, & his Personal Guardian takes care of ALL of his personal needs. There is intrigue, torture, adventure, and romance during their journey. There is sweet smut in the final part. #COWAwards2k18 #COWAwards2k18 #ammonawards2018 #bjcawards2018 #eleganceawards #hiddengensawards2k18 #newauthorawards #panteratigris #pastelawards2k18 #seta2018 #shookethawards #thedynamicawards #theelectricawards #themagicalawards #theoverachieverawards #theriseawards #theroyaltyawards #theshootingstarawards2018 #treeawards #wattiesretry2018 #ppawards2018 #loonaverseawards2018 #pphoenixawards #thecosmicawards2018 #thediamondawards #thewritersvoice2018 #themysticalawards #AEAwards2018 #unicornsarereal #geometricawards #thefreshcontest #TLAParticipant2018 #TRAwards #breathtakingawards #cloudawards2018 #supernovaawards #catsawards #pearlawards2018 #thevisionawards2018 #ohanaawards #mystiqueawards
A Court of Hope and Legacy by Annalisa_Coppolino
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«Twins. Sides of the same coin. Distant and close. Parted by stars and united by blood.» *** Phoenix Wars 2018 People's Choice Winner *** First Place Winner of The Leaf Awards 2018 *** This is my ACOTAR Fanfiction, inspired by the fantasy series of Sarah J. Maas A Court of Thorns and Roses. It is a spin off centered on the lives of Rhysand and Feyre's adult children-Suri and Aksel. They are twins but completely different under every aspect: Suri is a great warrior who has struggled to prove her worth and become a respected and feared leader, battling against those who claimed that a woman would never be part of the Illyrian army; Aksel is an introvert person, more inclined toward the privacy of libraries than crowded training camps, though his powers are as strong as his sister's. The siblings get involved in a troublesome situation and start investigating a series of distressing crimes against human people. They are compelled to cooperate, and to accomplish that they must overcome their differences and prejudices about each other. The peace and the future of Prythian rest in their hands as an old enemy schemes to destroy everything they've built. As the mysterious threat comes laid open, Suri and Aksel can count on the help of friends, family and unexpected allies in other Courts; but they also have to learn the cost of being heirs to the High Lord and High Lady of the Night Court; they discover the importance of love and how far they're willing to go for that feeling; most importantly, they finally start actually seeing each other and themselves for what they are, and not what they're meant to be.
Desire to kill by Blosssomss
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~A staged crime and a perfect blend of masked expertise~ HIGHEST RANK IN Mystery/Thriller : #39 A serial killer is on the loose. Who's gonna stop him? Robin is a typical spoilt rich guy who is charged for sexual assault of his ex girlfriends. He breaks out of prison with the help of his lawyer, Shreya, who is the most sought-after criminal lawyer in India. Robin eventually falls in love with her. While Robin is in hiding, a series of events take place, which change his life completely. All his ex girlfriends are murdered and Robin is framed for it. Who is the killer ? Why is he killing them?