Toyinfestation

"Ofcourse one believes a very frustrated six year old about a talking headless Barbie doll. All I got was an earful about how bad a brother I was and the next day I didn't get any fudge for breakfast. Because I was SUCH a bad boy, making excuses to cover up after myself. But I know. About them. The voices in the doll...

A Thievery Basis (Elements)

A work in progress. comedic work set in a fantasy world. Obviously there is not much here yet but I wanted to get feedback to see what people think as its my first ever piece of writing. All genuine feedback welcome