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The Last Philosopher: Part One by NickfEast
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11x featured wattpad story. Before everything, it's assumed there was nothing, but what if there was no real difference between the two? Just two extreme philosophies from the first conflict. The planet Huom has been under observation for longer than should technically be possible. The primary watcher, a bitter black hole, is excited to see that there is finally a proverbial Darkness at the end of the tunnel. Meanwhile, on the planet, in the freezing mountains of Empris, Lyeasrakardsul, the oldest living sorcerer, suffers from devastating nightmares. At the same time, far away in the sandstone desert of Zenon, Herschel, a man filled to the brim with weird ideas is escaping a prison filled with strange old men. What does all this have to do with arsehole Gods, hairy Dwarfs, frustrated Afreets, curious Knomes, lizard-women, and nude Áettar? Perhaps Nothing, perhaps Everything... but why can't it be both?
Of Past And Present  by Taikonaut
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Abused since her mother's death, Rin searches for a way out of her tormenting life.
Princess of the Sky by plunkey
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CROWN PRINCESS ARIANNA is at a crossroads in her life. To thwart off encroaching enemies, she must not become the queen her people want, but the one they need in the darkest hour of their lives: A living weapon with the power to strike fear into the hearts of her foes, swat away airships, and crush entire armies. ULION is an aether gatherer who works with his sister. Aboard a massive airship powered by steam alone, the duo travel, capturing the strange element located inside deadly storms. When one storm proves fatal, Ulion loses everything and ends up alone in a world that has no tolerance for those who serve no purpose. PRINCESS BEATRICE of Candia can see into the future. The death of her loved ones, the death of herself, and even the end of the entire world are constantly at the forefront of her mind. As she fights a losing battle to maintain her sanity, she finds courage enough to make an attempt to do the impossible: Change what is already meant to be. In a realm of mountains and sand, kingdoms and empires clash in an epic power struggle. And these three lives, intertwined, will make the final difference as humanity propels itself towards self-destruction.
Countdown To Reanimation by andreamaller
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After Alyson wanders into her father's laboratory, she stumbles upon one of his secret experiments. One that she was unwittingly a part of. Her discovery not only shatters her reality, but puts her life in danger when a rival scientist will stop at nothing to steal her father's work.
Death and the Emperor by NerissaMcC
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His Grace the Grand Duke Kilan never expected to become Emperor of Carann. But things rarely go as planned, and this is no exception. Who knows, he might even learn to like being Emperor. He could do without Death's interference, though. {Written for NaNoWriMo 2017, Camp NaNoWriMo June 2018, and NaNoWriMo 2018} Cover by @xXArachnidXx