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Uptight Jess falls hopelessly in love with her older brother's gorgeous friend, Louis. He shows her how to live on the wild side of life and what it means to truly love someone. But the problem is that her older brother is way too over protective. Especially when he knows Louis past. Will this scare her new love away? Or will her brother learn to let his little sister grow up? Read to find out!! "Aren't you scared to be with me? Aren't you scared of him?" I asked him looking in to his pale blue eyes. "No. The only thing I'm scared of is losing you."

[✓] ∥ "Cloe." "Cloe?" "Yes, Cloe." "...As in Lorena Cloe?" "How many Cloes do we know?" The taller of the two college boys looked across the bar, at the brunette who was sitting at a table in the corner. She was drinking Coke and talking to her friend, which he recently realized is a routine of hers. He knew her well; from the hallways, as well as class. He knew she spent days with her head in a book, or talking to the same group of people. There was nothing really special about her, nor did she catch anyone's eye for longer than five seconds. It confused him how she seemed to like it that way. He also knew that she was not just hard to get, but nearly impossible to. For someone as confident as him, he doubted himself quite a bit when it came to her. Nevertheless, he turned to his friend, a relaxed and casual look on his face, making him seem almost bored. "Deal." - Watty Awards 2013 Winner - Copyright © 2013 by funkystyles

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