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The Messy Haired Girl by QuirkyTeenageGirl
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Biography Report. Theatre. Soccer. GRADES. Tutor. Trust. Friends. Embark on the journey of Marcus and Hazel, who've know each other since 5th grade, but never really talked. All of a sudden, Marcus becomes Hazel's friend. Is he just using her or does he actually want to be Hazel's friend? And what about Aidan, Marcus's best friend who just moved back from Colorado? Does he like Hazel? No one knows Hazel's past, she's verrrrry secretive, but will one of these boys gain her trust... or maybe break it? Even athletes have problems, who could've imagined! Some people just smack a smile on their face when they show up to school, hoping no one will notice how fake it actually is. Who knew acting could be so easy...
La Vie En Rose  by _celestial__dreams_
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"When I close my eyes, you're somewhere with me." Rosie and Chris were inseparable since kindergarten. They did everything together. They even made a bucket list and promised to help each other fulfil it but life wasn't as easy as they thought when they were kids. Rosie lost Chris in a way she never imagined she would. All she had left of him was his memories and an unfulfilled task list. Will she be able to complete the list or drop the idea?
The If's & Not's by Omaima2301
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Emma is a young graduate who has everything settled. Bright girl with a flourishing future ahead of her. She doesn't leave anything to the hazard, all planned out from her morning routine to her job search deadline. However, her life would take an unexpected twist - the words that Emma despises the most- when she took the train back home. Little did she know, that her life will never be the same after taking the 2 Am train. The weirdness, the scary events that occurred on the train, the passengers' behaviors. Especially the tattooed man with the austere manners called by his suspicious folks by BOSS would send Emma chills down her spine. Her mind besieged by questions and her heart filled with unwelcomed feelings... Her inhibitions as in the Ifs and her norms as in the Nots may be mortified slowly and utterly by the end of this journey or maybe forever... ********* This story is a battle between Good and Bad, Self-Acceptance and Denial, Love and Lust.