Rose (@MidnightBlueRedRose) and I (@Ash-GreninjaGirl) will be reviewing Wattpad Pokemon fanfics at your request. If you wish, we can also review original stories. Expect a lot of brutal honesty from both of us, though we'll try not to be too mean. If your story really is bad, though, we don't make any promises.

"She's the reason.. I'm still here. Still working hard and still moving forward. I don't think I'd be here right now if it wasn't for her." -Ash Ketchum Enjoy. :)

You may think everyone lives in a happy ending, you may think that everyone and everything will be okay. But you are very wrong, the world is a painful place. And no one knows that more than Ash Ketchum. Disowned by whom he had called frien- no, wait, family. But he will prove them wrong. He will show them that they had been dragging him down and that he can live without them. He will prove that he is a true Pokemon master.

I should be a comedian. //HAS BEEN #1 IN HUMOR\\

After loosing at the Kalos League Ash finds himself being betrayed by those he cared for, people and pokemon alike, only a few loyal friends remained with him. Hurt and upset Ash travels to the only place he ever really loved, he meets up with an old friend and feelings emerge. Ash changes in more than one way and gains new friends, a new family, as well as pokemon that will stick by him no matter what. Join Ash as he faces this new chapter of his life.

Life for Ash turned upside down the day he found his friends betraying him. He gathered the pokemon who remained loyal to him and fled to the forest, his pain making him collapse. He is found by someone he thought to be dead and learns many truths about himself, truths that will change his life forever. With his new family, new pokemon, new friends and a new love will Ash show those who betrayed him who he really is?

The title says it all like thats it BOOM!

Idek

Ash Ketchum has finally surpassed the others to reach the finals of the Kalos League in Lumiose City. His opponent however, is Alain. A powerful trainer who he has never beaten before. But this time, Ash knows the true potential of his Pokemon. Serena always had her obvious crush on Ash, but being the oblivious person that he is, he never notices it. She knows her time with Ash may end soon, following the Lumiose Conference. Will she be able to ever release her bottled emotions? Little did anyone know, there is someone behind the reformation of the Kalos Region, trying to change the world into a 'beautiful place': Lysandre. The ultimate weapon that was used 3000 years ago will be resurrected. Who will win the Kalos League? Will anything change from it? Will the ultimate weapon be stopped? By who? Will the past visit the present? Most importantly, how will Serena deal with her feelings for Ash?

Ash and Serena's relationship took a whole different turn after they kissed- and not on the cheeks. After that kiss, Ash has finally somewhat understood something. Serena loved him. That being said, more questions come to his head to the point where it affects him, even in Alola. How will it all turn out? Can he return those feelings? Read it to find out!