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HELLBOUND ( BOOK 2 of THE IMMORTAL ANGELS TRILOGY) by somerandomchick2001
HELLBOUND ( BOOK 2 of THE IMMORTAL ANGELS TRILOGY)
somerandomchick2001
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  • Votes 8
  • Parts 9
When their highschool, Brinkston High, is sent into Lockdown after the death of their principal loud and clear on intercom, Adriana Anderson, Azeekiel Davidstar and Keria Romvelda are freaked out. On the inside. On the outside they are their usual selves, impassive, brave and a little crazy. The highschool is thrown into a maze of sorts where no one knows what will jump out at you at the next corner and Keira, Azeekiel's and Adri's only hope of saving the lives of all their fellow highschoolers is by fighting their way out- that and a little bit of magic. But when they finally do escape to heaven they realize that every city, of every country of every continent around the world is in lockdown. The army of hell has finally attacked and it's up to the angels of heaven and Adri, Azeekiel, and Keira, along with the skilled human archer Hunter, to save the world. As the greatest war in history is raging and peaks at its climax they realize that it all comes down to Luke, their friend and son of the devil currently HELLBOUND. But the real meaning of being HELLBOUND becomes clear at the last moment- a choice that Luke has to make to either be the key to Lucifer Satan's rise up to power or his demise. But what of the cost? Everything is riding on his two shoulders. He is the boy of darkness after all. And the darkness is coming.
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Ice Shard (Shifter Chronicles #1) by SilverOrchid77
Ice Shard (Shifter Chronicles #1)
SilverOrchid77
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  • Votes 14
  • Parts 1
Genevieve is walking home alone at night when a mysterious stranger appears out of no where. Claiming that he needs her help to find his friend, Eve agrees and follows him into Grenwood Forest. Something doesn't seem quite right though...appearances can be deceiving. Banner artist: roseate_ Edited by: ILoveYouCarissa Copyright: All rights reserved. Therefore, I retain all the rights provided by copyright law, such as distribution, performance, and creation of the work. Parts of my work can only be used in reviews or when making covers. Cover made by: CarKann
The Light in The Heart of Darkness [On a Hiatus] by SacredPen
The Light in The Heart of Darkness [On a Hiatus]
SacredPen
  • Reads 2,029
  • Votes 323
  • Parts 4
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬۞۞۞▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬ "In darkness, let there be light." ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬۞۞۞▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬ Copyright © 2014 by Janus Joshua Angeles.
The Titans Wake [The Write Awards 2014] by AuthorJordanHilliard
The Titans Wake [The Write Awards 2014]
AuthorJordanHilliard
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  • Votes 76
  • Parts 2
The four titans of Earth, Water, Wind, and Fire have laid dormant, sleeping buried within the planet for 10000 years. But when a celestial event summons their awakening, all of civilisation must pull together to stop them from their only purpose; to purge the planet. Emilia Rose, granddaughter of a legendary thief, must leave her life of luxury behind on a quest to uncover the grave of her grandmother. Legend has it that the last magic gauntlet rests with her remains and it might be the only thing that can fight back against the titans and save humanity. Meanwhile, at the tournament, the greatest spectacle of competition in the west, tensions are rising. With the fear of titans at large and an army approaching from the east, the rulers in the west gather their swords and prepare to fight for survival. From wild savage cannibals in the woods to fire breathing dragons atop mountains, even lowly guards and bakers boys can find their lust for adventure and their place in the great wars to come.
Fate's Exchange (Twisted Fate, Book 1) by SashaLeighS
Fate's Exchange (Twisted Fate, Book 1)
SashaLeighS
  • Reads 27,641
  • Votes 2,934
  • Parts 81
Alyssa dies in a brutal attack and is miraculously given a second chance. Can Alyssa discover the right choices in a sea of wrong? Or will her circumstances never change? With new love brewing and friendships on the line, what happens when chances run out? Can she survive? Death wants her. Angels protect her. Fate has claimed her. Triggers: Violence, sexuality (discussed, not portrayed), death
Alliance Book One: The Forest by ColdAndChaotic
Alliance Book One: The Forest
ColdAndChaotic
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  • Votes 42
  • Parts 7
THIS IS BEING REWRITTEN THE NEWER VERSION IS CLAWS AND CATERWAULS, READ THAT INSTEAD
Perfection [On hold - changing a lot of the story) by opulent_
Perfection [On hold - changing a lot of the story)
opulent_
  • Reads 32,627
  • Votes 1,193
  • Parts 11
America has been divided into two factions, the cause being the inveterate compulsion that demands adequacy in all aspects of beauty: perfection. Two contrasting societies sectioned from each other, with one side completely altering themselves to achieve the aim their ardent desire for perfection is fuelling whilst the other loathes the very principle of it, preaching it as a wrong and sinful act formed by a lust for refinement. Fleur Huxley is bound by her societies distaste for perfection. Lessons taught in an attempt to restrict this forbidden desire have been to no avail as covertly, Fleur can't help but be entranced by it all. After America's annual Supremacy day - a ceremony in which an individual is whisked away to a life in the perfection division - Fleur's life takes a sudden turn into a world she isn't familiar with. With impending rebellions and a zeal for perfection inciting her actions, Fleur is slipped into a world of deceptive passion and ravishing beauty, a place in which dangerous secrets lie behind the most beautiful eyes. But Fleur is oblivious to it all, persistent in her hunt for perfection but as haunting realities threaten the world she is enthralled by, will Fleur finally realise there is a dark side to perfection? After all, in a passion-driven world built on deceit, how many sacrifices can you truly make on a quest for ultimate perfection? [ science-fiction #12 - 2/1/14 ]
The Man with a Loco Motive by EmilyHodgson
The Man with a Loco Motive
EmilyHodgson
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  • Votes 268
  • Parts 16
Pierce Robins has had it tough. Being neglected, abused, uneducated, suicidal... he's the kind of guy that nothing good happens to. And, just when life couldn't possibly get any worse, it does. After being arrested, unsure if he really should be accused, he gets the most peculiar punishment...
Intoxicated by thetimeisnowxoxo
Intoxicated
thetimeisnowxoxo
  • Reads 6,412
  • Votes 498
  • Parts 19
Kenzie knew what it felt like to be wasted, but when she meets Niall she realizes what's it's like to be dazzlingly drunk. As they get closer he figures out that booze is the worst type of third wheel yet Kenzie is more than pleased to make room for it. But is the buzz from the bottle better than the high of walking on Cloud 9? How long can you go until you have to stop lying to yourself, and realize you are 100% intoxicated.