The Critiqued & The Pending
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The Zen Critiques by nataliehashearts
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Love Scarced by carikitty
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One girl. One boy. One-sided love. This is a story of a girl named Candice Whitmoore who is madly in love with Ayrton Drake Yeary since kindergarten. Yes, she thinks of him as her destined prince and she will let no one to come between them. Ever. She is not your nerdy, lousy kind of girl. She is pretty, proud, confident, sassy and talkative. She is considered one of the hottest girls in Cherry Hill High School. Known for being a spoiled brat who never fails to get what she wants. But what if Drake doesn't feel the same way? What if he doesn't like her? What if he is willing to hurt her just to get rid of her? Will Candice still be head-over-heels if she'll find out how a jack Drake is? Join them in their unforgettable High School life that is full of drama, happiness, betrayal, acceptance, and revenge. •••••••••••• This book is under Teen Fiction/ Teen Romance category, hence, there will be NO mature content nor other forms of content that are not suitable for all ages. This book is dedicated to portray a pleasant and an enjoyable reading experience to Wattpad community. •••••••••••• Self-Designed cover by @carikitty Status: Ongoing Rating: G Update: 1x a week
MIMI by paramyis
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Disowned and deemed useless by her family, Mimi Hirogori is a teasing mischievous girl whose only care and importance in the world lie with her beloved eldest sister. However, what Mimi didn't expect was the sudden occurrence of her sister's death. Alone with no one to support her, Mimi decides to step up her game and prove herself towards her deceased sister. In order to do all this while seeking revenge the young girl...disguises herself as a man?! An original story written by Paramyis
30 Days Ultimatum(COMPLETED)[✔] by strawberrytrifles
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This book is a RomCom book(Romance comedy). Read if you love laughing.😊 CURRENTLY EDITING AND WORKING ON RE-WRITING. PLEASE IGNORE SOME IMMATURE THINGS THAT THE CHARACTERS EXHIBIT. I'LL BE RE-WRITING THE BOOK AS SOON AS SCHOOL STRESS REDUCES A TAD BIT. Mia Montana has always had the fantasy of a perfect ever after. She believes she can find that in Dayne Matthews her current boyfriend. He is just that perfect person. It's him or no other. Jason Steele New York's most eligible billionaire bachelor. He is every ladies dream. But the problem is, he isn't looking for a long term commitment. Being a product of a failed marriage he believes love doesn't exist. Jason and Mia's grandfathers are best friends. When Mia's grandpa suffers from a mild heart attack, he realizes that there isn't much time left. But he has a wish, to see his grand daughter walk down the aisle. The problem is; he thinks Dayne isn't that man. He arranges with his best friend to match-make their grand children on the pretext of merging their companies. Jason and Mia refuse to compromise. So they strike a deal with them. "You both will live together for 30 days, if you don't fall in love with each other within those 30 days. You both can go your separate ways and marry whoever you want to marry". Found in between the devil and the blue sea, they both agree. Mia feels she is in love with someone already, so loving Jason will be totally impossible. But life isn't how it seems like always. They are yet to discover love isn't a matter of choice but a matter of the heart. Disclaimer- I know that this book has lots of plot holes, and all that. Trust me when I say I'm definitely working on it. I haven't fully gotten around editing it 'cause how busy life is at the moment. Note that, this book is my first book ever as a writer and as such has stuff that needs to be worked on. If you want to read a really thought out work, you can read my other books. I do hope you all understand.
The Balance (Revised) by sscott8
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A brutal war. A girl raised as a proud soldier, all too willing to fight and die for her country. A man whose life has been shattered, remade into one of fear and rage and hate. A boy who is caught in the web of politics, who experiences horrible things not meant for anyone, much less a child as young as he. This is a tale of two countries at war, and the lives of the people who reside there. This is a tale of the consequences of hatred and love, of treachery and loyalty, and of evil and good. --------------------------- The story and its characters are my creation; any similarity to other works or to current events is not intended. Plagiarism is not acceptable... honestly, have a bit of self-respect. I don't particularly care if you vote for this work or not. My only desire is feedback so that I can become a better writer. Awards for this novel: Honorable Mention: Best Protagonist (The Lunar Awards). Reviews for this novel: https://www.wattpad.com/571163180-honest-reviews-the-balance-sscott8 This is the second draft of the other story on my profile, and these were awards received for the original: * FGU Awards November: Best Death Scene (1st Place). * Drill Sergeant Award (Best Dialogue). * Seraph Awards: Honorable Mention. * Snowflake Awards: 2nd Place, Fantasy. Reviews received for the original: https://www.wattpad.com/550562523-honest-book-reviews-forever-closed-the-balance https://www.wattpad.com/477273782-book-reviews-sscott8%27s-the-balance
The Hunter by Blue-Cheese
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It's easy. You can do this. No problem, right? You're just flexing your finger is all. Nothing much. You do it all the time in training, it's no different. These were the words that ran through Joan's head like a never-ending mantra as she laid herself down on the forest floor. What she was about to do really wasn't all that different from what she'd done in training, you know, except for the fact her target was alive. Her target was a living, breathing creature that most likely had a family of its own - just like she did. Speaking of family, what would they think of her now? Whole generations of born and bred hunters, their legacies stretching back to when humanity first began, lead to her; a little girl who couldn't even pull the trigger because her emotions just had to get in the way of everything. Her mother had once said that her sensitivity was a good thing, it made her human, but right now Joan wished she was as tough and blank as a stone.
The Traveler by Darth_Rainbow_QoC
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Lucie Aconite ran away from home. The insignificant girl became a Traveler. Travelers are mandated to help heroes in need throughout the multiverse and any timeline. As a talented recruit, Lucie travels. And along her way, she's introduced to Demigods, Werewolves, Warlocks and Witches, Vampires, Druids, Magicians, Demons, and most recently : Shadowhunters. But no matter how far she goes, something will always take her back right where she started... Because there's no running away from your heritage. It's written in your blood. I own nothing but Lucie and the adventures she will live. {winner of the Cherry Awards 2018} [AU including Shadowhunters, Teen Wolf, The Chronicles of Narnia, TVD, The Originals, Charmed, PJO/HoO/Kane Chronicles, and others. Very freely inspired though.]
The Girl Who Kept Running by RhodoraO
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He ran into her at street theater. She was a force of nature, not a casual first time hire. She brought the house down with her performance, literally pulled the audience to their feet in standing ovation. Her performance was too real, unnerving, deeply unsettling to him. He spent all his energy keeping up with her. At the end of the play, she snatched her earnings from the director's hands and ran away, leaving a trail of questions behind her, the most burning one in his mind was: Would he ever see her again? ____________________ This ongoing novel imagines a world that our younger generations inherit after a series of successive presidencies in the same vein as the current model. There is no need for erecting walls, as the biggest divide created by humanity - that of social class - takes care of a post modern segregation. The poor are literally marginalized into slum-like townships and tend to be of color. The names of these townships would be enough to tell you their story. The rich, well, remain happily oblivious in the big American cities. In this world find a mysterious girl whose identity must be hidden or she would be hunted down and a young street actor who falls for her intrigue. Discover how they survive, born into a society not prepared to give them a chance. For them, the dystopia came without an apocalypse. Copyrighted 2018 _________________________________________________ Updates every 5-6 days. Currently on hiatus for revisions. Most impressive rank: #87 in dystopia/dystopian #90 in future (17/09/18) ________________________________________________________ Cover credits: Thanks are due to the amazing New Zealand artist Shane Rebenschied who allowed me to use one of his illustrations on his portfolio at http://blot.com. I used basic photoshopping to add some shades and used the awesome text effects from http://picturetopeople.com
I'm Still Sadie by ritanitatita
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Sadie Arlo hasn't been herself for a while. Like most teens, she has a lot on her plate, but it's much more than just chemistry homework or basketball games; she keeps finding herself switching bodies with strangers every single day. Is it tough? Of course, but it sure beats tenth grade. First place in the wicked awards!