Based on a DnD campaign, Critical Error is a dramatic narrative set in a post-apocalyptic world, focusing on the protagonist, Ryan, who is faced with the devastation caused by a catastrophic event. The writing is vivid and descriptive, painting a picture of a desolate landscape and a protagonist struggling to survive amidst chaos and danger. Ryan is portrayed as a determined and resourceful character, willing to risk his life to help others and overcome the challenges he faces.

Set in the same universe as H20: Just Add Water (events of Mako Mermaids did not happen), 4 highschoolers are doing a Biology Project on Mako Island. Not to keen of each other but still wanting to get the work done, they discover a cave with an oh so familiar Moonpool. As magic strikes, suddenly their lives take a 180° Turn. Their normal lives as they knew them? As gone as a dead fish in a stream. Will a shared secret bring these 4 together? Or will huge waves crash between them because of it? Note: I occasionally decide to re-edit older chapters a bit (mostly only little changes) so idk if it shows for readers, but if the release dates are all over the place this is why. And yes I try to avoid it as much as possible, but I can't help myself lmao