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Carmen - H.S by prisoners
prisoners
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"Put your red dress on, put your lipstick on, sing your song song, now the camera's on. And you're alive again."
It's Something Called Poetry by NPGuzman
NPGuzman
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This is the start of an amazing poetry collection. Just note that none of the poems are connected in anyway, each chapter is different. Hope you enjoy. (Copyrighted to Niecy Patricia. Any part of this story/work CANNOT used, adapted, or copied without the creator's full permission.)
A Blackened Eternity by jaspumpkin
jaspumpkin
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With time dwindling, the world descending into turmoil, and chaos being unleashed on the population, three unlikely companions must join together to rectify the "accident" they've caused. Time travel has been labeled a myth and a lie, but after the catastrophe, the future has been called into question. With two kids trapped in the fiery bonds of eternity, and one left to deal with the world's shocking aftermath, it's uncertain whether or not society will go on. Can these three young adults save their existence, fix the crumbling planet, and discover the secret that has held the universe together for so long? Only time can tell. [Update schedule: approximately every other weekend] [Highest ranking: #43 Adventure (12/06/2014)]
Havoc's Daughters by ACSmart
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The legendary mercenary once caused the Cumberan invaders so much trouble they dubbed him ‘Havoc’. But twenty years have passed. Peace has transformed the mercenary into a respected Roenish lord who fights most of his battles in Court. Now the Cumberans are invading once more, Havoc has been captured, and it’s up to his daughters to defend the march. Necessity sends Diannah into enemy territory, where she finds both refuge and an unanticipated dilemma. Her younger sister, Lania, fleeing an attack on foot, struggles to take care of her party of refugees and to meet her betrothed with the Roenish Army. No one has seen their foster sister, Havoc’s protégé, but J'Lian takes the blame for every disaster to befall the Cumberan camp; her bounty rises with the Cumberan king’s ire. Their efforts are complicated by past tragedy, and the lurking secret of Havoc’s origins..
Wild Child by _FireQueen_
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Come...Fall In Love! by hemisha
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Kathy would always tell herself, "An arranged marriage is not something I'd ever settle for. I believe in love stories; I believe that I'll find my prince charming one day!" Meanwhile, Ronnie believed the opposite. "Love and relationships are all fake. I don't want to waste my time with any of it." Little did they know that there was someone who'd already planned their lives, and in a way they would never expect. Destiny got them together and it was their task to make things work between them. Will they fall in love, or will they continue to believe in their preconceived notions? Come...Fall In Love! (All Rights Reserved)