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The Minerva Prophecy by Science_Meets_Magic
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"My dear, you've been living the equivalent of two lifetimes in one. And at some point, these lifetimes would converge and collide." Themis lightly waves her hand and the blue butterfly flutters out of her hand. "Two lifetimes?" Crystal is highly skeptical again. "Yes, and at some point, you would be faced with a moment of great change. The road will become forked somewhere. And the path you chose to go down would have an enormous bearing on the rest of your life." --- Crystal's childhood was anything but normal, plagued by strange happenings and tragedies. The person who saved her from depression and isolation was her best friend, Jackson. Now the founder of a highly successful company, she starts finding strange and unusual things happening to her again. Recurring dreams led her to meet a psychic named Themis, who tells her that she was living the equivalent of two lifetimes in one and that at some point, these lifetimes would converge. Themis also warns her that she is in grave danger. There are people who need her alive and there are people who need her dead. But in order to understand her life and who she truly is, she must confront this situation. Soon after her meeting with Themis, she is ambushed by people looking to capture her and encounters the man who's voice she's been hearing in her head. And quickly, Crystal is pulled into a world unlike anything she has ever seen before.
The Song of Sqia'lon Seven by Svoosh
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December 2018: The Song of Sqia'lon Seven writing prompt issued by @ScienceFiction. An intrepid band of space travelers, Nfrite, Serhat, and Kuma have come from their home planet to Sqia'lon Seven. They want to learn the truth about the inhabitants of their ruined sister planet. Once they hear a voice calling to them, however, their quest takes a dark turn. Curious? Read on. • ⦿ ⥉ ❍ ⥉ ⦿ • • ⦿ ⥉ ❍ ⥉ ⦿ • Word Count: ~1900 • ⦿ ⥉ ❍ ⥉ ⦿ • • ⦿ ⥉ ❍ ⥉ ⦿ • Highest Rankings #6 2019 Winter Challenge 500 #29 Writing Contest
Fly High | ✅ by Iori_kei
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Came here to die, only to be saved. One encounter on the rooftop and he's hooked, leaving Adrian constantly thinking about him. Like an open wound left unattended, his affection slowly festered into an obsession.
Gregory Girls Gone Wild |GirlxGirl| by arthia
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The water supply at Gregory College is contaminated, possibly fatal, and definitely unfit for drinking. It's the worst crisis Gregory College has ever had to deal with in years. Twenty year old Rainey Dumar is in charge of delivering free water bottles to her fellow students. She likes the job, but it is what it is: a way to get cash and support her struggling family. Things take a sharp turn when a new employee joins the team: Danika Reddy, a sophomore who is sweet, gorgeous, and maybe not the smartest person around. The two girls are polar opposites: hot and cold, gay and straight, and lo and behold violent sparks fly in the workplace, unlike anything Rainey's ever felt before. To make matters worse, Rainey finds herself entangled in a sinister spirit group on campus. They like to steal cars, leave mysterious notes, and threaten innocent lives. Despite attempts to resist all outside help, it's Danika who comes to her rescue. Danika, who is nothing like she seems, is fiercely protective of her uptight boss, danger be damned. Drowning in trouble, Rainey can't tell which is worse: being targeted by a criminal college cult or falling for a straight girl. Welcome to Gregory College.
Suicide Hotline € Lashton by LovedYouFirst_xox
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One Night, and one very long call. One call that saved Ashton's life.
Edogon -- Revised (2018) by LadyDestinysTragedy
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Taken from Earth and awoken in an era unknown to him, Dune struggles to find his place in his new reality. Challenged to win the heart of his Captain, Dune soon starts to crave for Avery to fall for him; bet or no bet. Sci-fi Action/Romance set in 3101
The Disease Called Men by _quinta
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Who needs boys? Certainly not Aldenbury Girls Grammar School! Just when everything begins to finally fall into place, it falls apart-at least, for student council president Cerise. Cerise will do everything in her power to prevent Aldenbury from becoming co-ed. That includes bribery, coercion and maybe even the use of blackmail (which she may or may not have orchestrated the events herself). Along with her loyal, albeit reluctant group of friends, she has one goal in her mind: Eliminate this disease called men. Featured on the #TeenFiction and #Humor official reading list. (can be read as satire)
The Price of Beauty by miramallows
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Simple name. Simple hair. Simple life. Claire Johnson was the exact image of a completely simple girl. And maybe she was, until she wanted to be more than that, or perhaps, realised she could be more than that. But what was the price of beauty? ────────── "The world breaks everyone, and afterward, many are are strong at the broken places." - Ernest Hemingway ────────── Although this book doesn't require a mature rating, reader discretion is advised as there are mild themes. Please note that, in order to keep the spontaneity of the book, there will be no trigger warnings. In addition, the ages in the book are wrong and haven't been updated. ────────── Self-Designed Cover (@miramallows) Currently editing + Ongoing. Aiming to complete the book by May 2019. Updates every 2-3 days
The Convention (Ab)Use by Orumeena
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Wes has just returned to the town and country of his birth, Sarpari, India. He lets loose on a night of adventure with his friends. It ends up becoming one long night of horror, rather political horror. A night which drags him and his friends into something they were not prepared for. Two separate but related incidents lead Wes and his friends into dealing with powers that seem unstoppable. The friends encounter the ugly side of diplomatic immunity. Now they have to seek for some justice. *Still a work in progress with developments, edits etc. bound to happen*
Dreamt by lily1066xc
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Elise Silva exists only in the shadow of her twin Jeremy. The lack of attention she receives in reality causes her to find solace only when she dreams where she is always with Jay. Jay provides her constant company, protection, and reassurance. However, when she meets Luke, Jay completely disappears from her dreams. Although devastated by Jay's abrupt disappearance, Luke pushes Elise to open herself up more and shows her the benefits of manifesting her reality over the facade of living in a dream.