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The Oracle: Book 1 - Genesis (ON HOLD) by AlexLeonard24
The Oracle: Book 1 - Genesis (ON HOLD)
AlexLeonard24
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  • Parts 7
After a war that obliterated Malkiliath, the Earth Guardian, who carried a new born child fled to the haven of Earth. 17 years later, the new born had grown to be a young, ordinary man who attends college to complete his education to become a Psychiatrist. Like any other teenager, he deals with the every day problems that are thrown at him, including not being able to admit his sexuality. But Jackson's everyday life changes when he begins to have traumatic dreams. Dreams that later become a horrifying reality and the true extent of evil is revealed and his family, as well himself are in great danger. A Demon who can transform into anything, or anyone, is stalking Jackson, waiting to strike! Jackson's life turns upside down once learning the truth of the demon trying to assassinate him and his family. London is collapsing from unknown attacks that only Jackson can see, and knows what is causing them. Why is he being hunted? Who is the demon and more importantly, who is Jackson? The first instalment of the new, thrilling, jaw-dropping series that everyone is anticipating! The Oracle: Book 1 - Genesis. Completion 2015
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Empathy- The Diaries of Olympus #1 by somerandomchick2001
Empathy- The Diaries of Olympus #1
somerandomchick2001
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  • Parts 11
We are eternally linked. I can feel what she can feel. Emotionally and Physically. Everyone is possessed. Olympus is crumbling. We are are the only ones left. Everything hangs in the balance. I cannot stop this. This feeling is beyond me. Sparks fly when we touch. She is all I think about. I cannot be helped. I think I am in love.