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Ace Ablaze by icarusflies
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Seth is a phoenix…sort of. Plus, the phoenix and the dragon are destined for one another, according to legend, so he shouldn’t really be shocked when the Dragons finally arrive on his doorstep. They’re boorish and abrasive and not exactly polite houseguests, but they refuse to leave until Seth accepts a ‘mating proposal.’ What’s worse is that Seth doesn’t know how to inform the dragons that he’s a grey-romantic asexual, and this entire proposal is giving him a ridiculous amount of angst. Unfortunately, Seth’s knowledge of the legendary side of life is less than rudimentary, so he doesn’t actually understand what it means when an entire rage of dragons relocates to accommodate a person like him. If he had this knowledge, then he would know that the only reason that dragons propose formal mating agreements to phoenixes is when their clan is in immediate danger. To make this entire ordeal that much better, the reason for the dragons’ panic is harboring itself inside one of Seth’s friends. Much to his chagrin, the creature, an Ichneumon, is impossible to get out of a host body once it’s settled. Seth can deal with having the spirit of a giant firebird inside him—he really can—but everything else is just too much.
Never the Same by ieatplants
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Meet Aspen, perfect life, amazing boyfriend, everyone loves her, when her mouth gets her in trouble she meets the bad boys of Anderson Private School. Meet Ryder, the typical bad boy, cigarette in mouth, motorcycle, leather jacket, and a to die for smirk. When their worlds collide will it drive them crazy?
The Coffee Shop by SeekingSolace
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An underground musician with shaking hands and a writer with anxiety issues, both hoping to be unnoticed but end up bonding over a shared love for coffee and science fiction. He's soft spoken and level headed. She's shy, relying on her favorite books to be her outlet to the outside world. A short story told in a form of journal entries; about love, loss, heart break, and disease. Chicklit #209 Short Story #455
The Fauna of Egac. by Tottarasu
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This book is a fantasy encyclopedia of all the creatures within the mythical land if Egac. It will take you from the very smallest creature to the vary largest, with a dangerscale to help you judge. (I'm hopefully starting the trilogy of books set in Egac in May.)