LunarThorne
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This is for my bff who loves this quirky pokemón Sun and Moon character Hau. I decided to make her this story, however if you read this there is something you need to know ... this...is....My FIRST s reader! So pleeeeeeeease no hate. I like constructive crotocism, but some people don't know what that is. So as an example I will write this below....
Penguin are the cutest animal alive! adapt two today?..
(non-example)- WHAT THE HECK PENGUIN IS SUPPOSED TO BE PLURAL YOU IDIOT! GO BAD TO PRESCHOOL!!!! AND WHAT'S WITH THE STUPID QUEESTION MARK?!?!? IT'S SUPPOSED TO BE A PERIOD OF EXCLAMATION POINT!!!!
(right example) Hey, Penguin is supposed to be plural, and I think a exclamation point would be better than a question mark. Otherwise great sentence :).
(constructive crotocism lesson finished)
So this applies with basically everyone.... yeah... not many people like being called a dumb idiot.... anyhow... have fun reading!