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Locked From Heaven And Hell by S1LV3RBULL37
S1LV3RBULL37
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Thank you all for 100 reads! I never thought I would get this far, but here we are. Thank you for supporting this book in its work-in-progress state, and enjoy my most popular original book, Locked from Heaven and Hell (AKA: For the Light and the Darkness) Are you tired of the usual vampire romance novels? Do you despise the new age of vampire novels and some new vampire movies? You'll love this book, then. Throughout the Wattpad Amino, the book's been given great reviews and amazing feedback (chapters 1 through 8. The new chapters have not been reviewed, yet.) Although, the book is not done, yet. If any of you have any ideas as to what should happen next, leave a comment in the LATEST chapter. Yes, I've taken a little bit of inspiration from various anime, but this novel and its mechanics are my original idea, as far as I can tell. Also, yes the main character is bi. No, there is no real romance. (Each chapter ranges from 800 words to 1500 words.)
Catoptrophobia  by IAmNyctophobic
IAmNyctophobic
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Stacie Hawkins, a 15 year old young girl develops and extremely intense fear for mirrors. Her friends at school scare her with the "Mirror Man" story. Everyone in school made fun of her genuine fear. Even her parents didn't believe her and thought that she needed psychological help. The mirrors in her house sat there from the very beginning and besides the passing paranoia of something in their reflection, a feeling common in mirrors, there was nothing to care about. But then, she started to have the dreams, dreams that haunted her. Dreams about creatures creeping out of mirrors that bedevilled her for life. It wasn't just a figment of her imagination or any hallucination but, it was an irrational fear, a fear that may cause her to die, a parasitic fear of mirrors, a catoptrophobia. Excerpt: My dad was hanging with a cable tied around his neck. It was connected somewhere in the bedroom and he was outside the window. As he spun, I saw another note. It was nailed to his heart. Ten people I didn't even know were strung up in different ways all around the room. Some by their necks, others by their toes. Some even by their hair. All had their eyes dug out and open gaping mouths. All were hanging about a foot above my height. I was crying but I got back up. I was determined to destroy this mad girl. As I walked to the stairs, staring at all the bodies, I heard a sound like something was dropped down the stairs. It was a blood covered arm. I heard the sound again, this time it was a leg. Then an arm, then a leg and then finally, a head. It was my mom's head. ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ Highest ratings: No. 1 in phobia No. 1 in mirrors 2 in helplessness #41 in ghost out of 2.92 k #247 in horror out of 15.1k #6 in nightmares out of 3.16k
A Story To Tell: Season 1| A Zombie Apocalypse Story (Completed) by thatrandomgeekgirl
thatrandomgeekgirl
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There is something different about this virus. It doesn't just make you sick. It kills you. It reanimates, it turns you into something else. An ordinary teen? That's what Amber would consider herself. She checks all the boxes for a regular teenager. Boyfriend. Annoying brothers. Loving parents. Sporty. Smart. But what happens when her school is put on lockdown for a mass infection spreading? People are killing each other for supplies. The so-called "infected people" are eating others alive. They're never sleeping, never crying with pain. The only thing stopping them is to destroy the brain. Now, Axel, whose always had to fend for himself lunges into this new world with the idea of survival. But is it so different from before? With his lonely and depressing childhood, he makes a promise to someone. He will protect those he loves. Even if it means he loses his humanity in the process. Prepare for chair edging action and dangerous foes that will keep you wondering about whether humanity actually exists. And if these sacred lives will be tattered, tested, and ruined in the dangerous new world that has hit them. Word Count: 73,416 Ranked #1 in zombieapocalypse Ranked #3 in apocalypse Ranked #7 in survive Ranked #1 in endtimes Ranked #1 in zombieoutbreak Ranked #7 in survivor Ranked #70 in kill Ranked #28 in endoftheworld Ranked #21 in risk Ranked #38 in survival Ranked #16 in zombie Ranked #509 in horror Start: 4.21.19 Finish: 2.14.20 DISCLAIMER- This is a FICTIONAL novel, this book is not scientifically accurate when it comes to the idea of zombies.