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Trace (On Hold) by oceanacamerons
oceanacamerons
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Love comes in many forms. Speaking about it, imagining it, and melting at the mere prospect of it can leave you giddy with its richness. But defining it, expressing or experiencing it - that's a different game. Elijah - the heir to the throne of Yandestine - is about to play the game, with no knowledge of the rules or boundaries. A game that involves the clashing of naked bodies, the shadows of truth and tears constantly dancing and delving in blood; a beautiful bridge between lust and love. A game that cunningly turns into a battle between gory promises of justice and the painful quivers of breaking hearts, much too quickly. No one will come out the same. Not even you. [22.08.19] all rights reserved ©️2019 cover by @Pennywithaney
Lawrence Looks for Treasure by JonaElliot
JonaElliot
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An undistinguished, middle-aged writer tries to publish the first novel he ever wrote. It describes the summer he graduated high school, the summer of '99, when he and three friends left their hometown in search of Native treasure. Along the way, he reflects on who he is and how to live.