Books I've Critiqued
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Temporary Love by Thatservergirl
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"So, what are your other intentions, Mr. Hughes?" "You. Ally. You are my intention." *** Ally Marsh was your average 21-year-old college student. She was always second best, no matter the sacrifices she made for those around her. Until she met Harvey Elias Hughes, a Marine veteran who had so much to give, but no one to give to. She wanted someone to understand her choices. He wanted a fresh start from his past. Neither of them can deny their magnetic attraction between themselves, nor could they hide from it. Will moving on from their pasts jeopardize what they've found in one another? Cover by @aleshawrites_
A Feather May Float by _Sanguine
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When an unlikely friendship forms, two very different entities must delve into their pasts in order to face the future. Orfiel, an angel who owns a woodcarving shop on Earth, is tired. His struggles with his deeply-rooted anxiety leave him feeling completely and utterly lonely in his daily life. When a mysterious human comes poking about, Orfiel starts to feel a little less alone. But this human, Melek, appears to have a traumatic past of their own, one that they don't want to share. Is Melek exactly what they claim to be? And, despite their differences, could Melek and Orfiel ultimately help each other to move on with their lives? ||Added to WattpadShortStory's Phantasm and Sorcery list||
Transformation, the beginning by RKaitlynn
RKaitlynn
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It's a cliche, ordinary girl meets a good looking guy and they fall in love. Well, they would have if she let herself and if he wasn't a creature she thought only existed in stories. That one visit to her aunt's house near the forest changed everything. Seeing a wolf transform into a boy made her think she hallucinated for a week. But that thought changed when she got called out of class to show the new boy around. The moment she saw his eyes, her body petrified, realizing she never hallucinated and that her life won't be normal anymore. All the girls are drooling over Jason, but his eyes are only on one person, Cira. ''What are you?'' was the first question he asked her. She will find out that she isn't as ordinary as she thought she is. Will, they eventually fall for each other or will they end up on opposite sides when they find out she is a creature almost no one knows of?
Two Can Keep A Secret by axa_reads
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Clement is supposed to be a safe town. A town with family legacies and bright smiles and an overwhelming supply of casseroles. It's supposed to be a happy town, a town without secrets, deceptions, and murder. Alyssa is supposed to be your average good girl. Colt is supposed to be your average bad boy. And at the end of whatever cliche situation life throws at them, they're supposed to get together. But they don't. Instead, Colt dies and no one in the town seems bothered to find out why. While Alyssa can't seem to let his death go, finding out the reason behind it may put the whole town at stake.
Good Enough by i_hate_green_tea
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Good enough... Is something Julian Ortega will never be. A disappointment, worthless, and useless to those around him, Julian has finally reached his breaking point. He has been falling towards the end for a while. But he might have just found someone to bring him back. Mia Blake has some of her own demons to battle. She's been faltering between the lines of "okay" and "not okay" for over a year now. But she's the only one who knows how she kills herself on the inside a little more each day by not eating. Told in alternating points of view, Julian and Mia come together to face their thoughts and emotions - and maybe even love.
Heal Me [#wattys2019] by hdel15
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InuYasha and Kagome have been friends since birth and are extremely close. At a young age, Kagome becomes a victim of sexual assault. Luckily for her she has InuYasha by her side to help her and over time they grow even closer. As InuYasha and Kagome fight away all the things that cause each other pain and heal with time, will they eventually become more than friends? This is a revised version of my original story from fanfiction.net.
Pregnant by my Brothers Best Friend by lucero249
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Jason is Cassidy's brothers best friend. Cassidy doesn't think any boy has every noticed her. Little does she know that Jason has always had a thing for her. Slowly they are starting to fall for each other there is only one thing that is in their way. Cassidy's brother. There are a lot of obstacles thrown their way. Will they make it to the end, or will they go their separate ways? Read to find out. Thank you @Victoriapinkglitter for the amazing cover. [:
Record Store Blues // Steve Harrington by bluecarraway
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It's 1984 - the teenage world is a dangerous concoction of sex, drugs and MTV. But for Marla, it goes something like good grades, friendship bracelets and one too many Tom Cruise posters. Record Store Blues - A Steve Harrington fanfic
Please Don't by hdel15
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Miroku and InuYasha have been best friends since elementary school. They have a special bond that has withstood the tests of time. Their relationship means the world to both of them, especially Miroku, but what happens when someone new comes along and starts to occupy InuYasha's time and attention? Inspired by the music video for "Please Don't" by K.Will.
The Case Puzzle by bowdownpeasantz
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Being a paralegal mostly entails being stuck in the office, with piles of cases to prepare and organise. But not for Haelyn Carter. Curious at heart and with a passion for investigation, Haelyn always digs deeper in the cases she gets her hands on. But is it always without consequence? Prying too much into the disappearance of a patient from a hospital costs her dear as a near abduction is only the start of problems. With the rise of other similar cases, the International Operation Forces step in for investigation. Will they solve the mystery before it's too late? Or will Haelyn be yet another addition to the cases? 🏆Genre Champion in the Imperial Scribes Awards 🏆1st place in Skyfall Awards 🏆2nd place in The Golden Awards 🏆2nd place in the Gem-ers Awards 🏆2nd place in The Starfire Awards 🏆2nd place in The Sunflower Awards 🏆3rd place in The Life Elements Awards ♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡ Credit to @Werewolves9090 for title inspiration. Credit to @itsmarrosee for book cover.