SCP 1471 adaptation First time writer. Any suggestions and grammar checks appreciated. Just to clarify anything written in bold lettering will be the SCP speaking.

A fanfic about two creatures, different from one another, but yet very alike. The story follows up on a normal person, named Dave, stumbling upon an animal looking creature, thing, known as SCP-1471. Even with how creepy she may be, he still manages to take her to his house. What follows is what you have to find out next...

(Y/N) was abandoned by his own species on a hunting reserve used by alien hunters out to take his head as a trophy. But is the yautja hunting him really after his head, or something else?