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Equilibrium by glowingspacedoctor
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Zenneth Valgustus, an elf marked by the downfall of his lineage, embarks on a journey through realms steeped in both magic and human intrigue. Shunned by the elven hierarchy and marginalized in a society once ruled by wealth, Zenneth forges an uncharted path within the realm of technology. Zen's life quickly and thoroughly intertwines with that of Kevyn Fuego, an amiable ex-airman and elf from another tribe. As Zenneth is propelled into the dizzying machinations of power and influence - corruption and warmongering - he confronts the essence of his being. Amidst the chaos, Zen discovers his true self, finding solace and courage in the unwavering support of Kevyn. Through trials that challenge the very fabric of their existence, their connection deepens, offering a beacon of hope in a world teetering on the brink of turmoil. It is love, resilience, and the indomitable spirit that sees them through this tumultuous and captivating universe. "I love the world, mixing technology with magic!" - Easterhead "I am now emotionally attached to this fish, I'm naming him Robert." - Cactus_Friend "Just as I started to wonder what the drama and conflict would be, you dropped the bomb." -LemuelMcMillan Awards: - The Virtues Awards, Fantasy Category 2024 - Third Place - The Pride Awards 2024 - First Round Winner
Of The Lamp by abiiiithewriter
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He might be her only chance at freedom. But trusting a mortal? That's a risk she refuses to take. ✷✷✷ Dina is a prisoner, a powerful creature bound to The Lamp and only released to grant three wishes. When she's summoned by a new master, she's offered something rare: a chance at freedom. But there's a catch. The North is fractured. Everyone knows it never recovered after the failed Southern invasion. To earn her freedom, her master (a rebel, a mortal and far too charming for his own good) is asking for her help. His plan? Take down the ruling elite. With as little bloodshed as possible. As the Sidhe, she holds immense power. But every wish has a cost. Magick is tricky. Dangerous. You don't always get what you wish for, and Dina knows that better than anyone. Can she use The Lamp for good and finally gain her freedom? Or is it all a trap? Dina isn't sure. But one thing is certain: her freedom isn't the only thing at stake. ✷✷✷ [WEEKLY UPDATES! ] Loosely based on Aladdin, with inspiration and creatures from Scottish Mythology and Folklore.
New Elysium: Breakout by Red_Leasia
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When mechanized humans, known as "augs" fell prey to a whole new set of viruses aimed at controlling them, they were imprisoned out of fear. Anyone caught with any robotic implants were sent to the Helion prison complex, and purged from normal society. Even those who used to serve humanity. One such aug, Red, imprisoned for seven years in Helion dreams of escape. Initially recalled and stripped of his command of Aphelion, he dreams of escape which begins to shape into a reality when a new augment is dropped into the facility. One whose very identity would mean death from either side of the conflict. But one whose abilities could lead Red to New Elysium, freedom and the ability to take back what was stolen from him. 1st Place in the 2017 Crowning Gem Awards Science Fiction Category 3rd place in the 2017 Reach for the StarsScience Fiction winner! 3rd Place in the 2017 TickTock Awards Sci-Fi Category! 3rd place in the 2017 Zombie Awards Science Fiction Category!
The Count of Castle Rock by LemuelMcMillan
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Learn the true history of Castle Rock, seat of power for the most renowned wizard of The Three Nations. See how a seemingly normal city girl changes both the course of his life and the course of the entire kingdom of Quinlain. Sword and sorcery clash as love and magic shift reality, even as hate and treachery poisons hearts. History will be made and The Three nations will never be the same. Leesa Talbert's life was on the trajectory of any normal third child of an average merchant, that is until she met Hans Heathson. Hans was special, slated to be the first apprentice of the world's most prolific wizard. In Hans she finds a friend and the inspiration to strive for more. Together they brave the caprice of his dangerous master and face his twisted dark past. But theirs is only one story. War lurks on the horizon and rumbles towards the two. Theirs and many other stories collide when the north erupts in a battle of life and death. At its center sits the Black Count of Castle Rock.