This story is about a high school boy who is a vampire but doesn't know that and lost his parents when he was a young boy the reunits with his mom but finds out his dad died *Author* this is my first story so please tell me how it is and what I should do for future stories

I've never been good at descriptions but I hope you still enjoy

Ok so this is my first vampire story so give me some room to work with the new material I was given today. (Please?) "Pen there are somethings I can't tell you and I'm sorry.... I have to go and you have to trust me." His tone sounded so calm, like everything around us wasn't happening. Resting his soft porcelain hands on mine. "Pen you believe me don't you?" "Of course I do." I said tightening my grip on his as a stray tear ran down my cheek. Wiping it away as a tear betrayed him as well he softly smiled and leaned in to kiss my head. "I promise Pen... I'll come back for you." Smiling softly I closed my eyes and looked down nodding. "You better.... asshole." I laughed softly and as did he as I looked back up to him. Staring at my eyes for a minute he softly kissed my head again and in a blink of an eye he was gone. "I love you..."