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︱︱WHEN I FALL ︱︱ #TheCoronaAwards2020 by DJChocoHolic
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WINNER OF THE MOST ORIGINAL STORY IN THE CORONA AWARDS 2020. ''I once told a butterfly that humans need to pay for their sins, and the butterfly carried my word across the seas.'' The fires in Australia took away her home, so Kayla moved to Wuhan. But then she found a conch -part of her grandma's culture and everything went down hill from there. '' My grandma was Mayan.'' '' Then don't take it. Magic is stronger on your own kin.'' So it is Coronavirus really a virus created in the lab, a weapon of the Chinese government or simply the result of a Mayan curse? ''I felt a lump in my chest, it was like a blood clot had exploded, but I patched up my wounds and opened my diary. There are two words I've written on that page; one was the Chinese word - Pòhuài( 破坏) for destruction, and the other was the Yucatec word - Kimen - for death.'' Find out ... if you dare!
Flawed by krisnova13
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Charlee lives a normal life, Shes about to go off to college and make something of herself outside her small town, but when past and present collide will she make it out with her soul intact or will she forever be flawed? Cover done by artsylivia Check out her page! She's awesome.