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An almost death experience can change a person. Lexington Grant felt that change the day of the incident. But how do you deal with change when you can't explain what's happening to you or why? Time doesn't seem to help. And four years later that feeling of something missing is still there, and it's not just her memory of that day. Trying to ignore the lost feeling, Lexington focuses on enjoying her time as a college freshmen. But her world comes crashing down again when her past incident finally catches up to her. Now, finding out everything that she didn't think was possible is possible, everything is changing. Vampires exist. But finding out that she's something special and yet an abomination is a scarier thought. And what's worse is that vampires want her dead. Except the man with dashing good looks, who she can't help but slowly fall for. With the help of her protector she will have to show that she belongs in this world, by his side. But staying alive might be even harder.

A young and impressionable Elizabeth Bruce begins an illicit affair with President John F Kennedy, and must decide if one brief shining moment in a Camelot era world is worth destroying everything she holds dear. ***** In the summer of 1963 when President John F Kennedy first set eyes on the young Elizabeth Bruce, she was just a girl from a wealthy American family. But she was different than the other women he had seduced; she was unpolished and unrefined, but there was something fresh and new about her that he craved desperately. And she was entranced by him and the glory and wonder of the Camelot world that he brought with him. Follow Elizabeth's story as she begins an illicit and dangerous affair with the most powerful man in America, and find out just how much it cost to have 'one brief shining moment' in Camelot. ... #52 IN HISTORICAL FICTION (October 2021) DISCLAIMER: This story and the events depicted in it are entirely fictional.

FROM THE AWARD-WINNING AUTHORS OF THE CHEATER.FAKER.TROUBLEMAKER SERIES (WATTY'S 2016, FICTION AWARDS 2016, HACHETTE AUDIO 2017), JENNY ROSEN & KRISTEN MAGLONZO. After bullies, braces, and brutal heartbreak shatters his faith in love, soon-to-be freshman & former geek, Elias King, spends the summer growing into his new good looks. To seal the deal on his sudden rise to popularity, Elias puts his virginity up for grabs online, hoping his antics will skyrocket him into the ranks of social royalty. After becoming the most notorious bad boy at Mission Bay High, getting any girl he wants is just a matter of keeping his inner-romantic a secret. At least, until her. When a shy girl on the softball team falls for the real boy behind the bravado, Elias discovers that his first real shot at love just might be worth risking his reputation for. But dating a social media king comes at a price, and when an obsessed stalker exposes the most intimate secrets of Elias's love life online, it's a race against time to catch the culprit before a viral video rips his relationship apart. (This is the prequel to the award-winning CHEATER.FAKER.TROUBLEMAKER SERIES (Watty's Most Voracious Reads Winner 2016, Fiction Awards Winner 2016) published by Hachette Audiobooks in 2017. The first two books of the CFTM series, CHEATER.FAKER.TROUBLEMAKER and LOVE HER, LEAVE HER are available on Amazon, Target, Walmart, and Audible)

When Atlanta gets mixed up in a world filled with the impossible, she begins to question everything she thought she knew about the world. *** Atlanta Dawn has spent years running from her past, avoiding the scars caused by childhood ordeals. But when Atlanta saves Dameon Emerit from a fight her carefully controlled world takes a turn for the worse as she discovers things about Dameon's life she didn't think possible. As she pushes for more information to understand the secret laws of the world her past begins to catch up to her.

Fifteen sim houseguests partake in an adventure that will change their lives. Each sim is competing for a grand prize of $500,000, by being cut off from the outside world and forced to participate in competitions until one sim is left standing.

He came to her in moonlight - a prince in gold, crowned with stars. She thought she'd found love beyond the mortal world. Instead, she found herself branded a sinner, a madwomen, and a mother to seven lost children. The church wants to save her soul. The court wants to condemn her. But she will not repent. As whispers of witchcraft spread, her testimony blurs the line between delusion and divine truth- and the question remains: What if she's telling the truth? A haunting tale of passion, faith, and the dangerous beauty of believing in magic. *********************************** This story is not edited nor will it be until it's completed. There are going to be grammar mistakes but I hope you can over see that and enjoy the story.