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Who Are You? [ON HOLD UNTIL FURTHER NOTICE!] by MrsPopular_
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Twenty-nine-year-old Shanice Samuels and Jeremey Haughton have two young children that they're raising together. Living in Toronto, under the same roof and considering marriage, Jeremey feels he is too young to completely settle down, and is ready to back out, but Shanice feels she is fully prepared to take on marriage. The question is, how long will he be able to continue being an amazing father and a faithful boyfriend?
Alissia's downfall by Bieberswarrior
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In Malibu there's a school called Collin McEwen High School. For the last few years the school has always had the same it-girl Allisia Alivia. She has been dating Tyson for the whole desertion of high school but when a new girl called Sienna Gonzalez arrives at their school in the beginning of senior year Alissia's world seems to come crashing down as people start seeing Sienna as the new It-girl of the school. And when the It-couple breaks up and Sienna and Tyson Rodrigues seem to get closer and closer everyday Allisia does anything to get under Sienna's skin
A Blackened Eternity by jaspumpkin
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With time dwindling, the world descending into turmoil, and chaos being unleashed on the population, three unlikely companions must join together to rectify the "accident" they've caused. Time travel has been labeled a myth and a lie, but after the catastrophe, the future has been called into question. With two kids trapped in the fiery bonds of eternity, and one left to deal with the world's shocking aftermath, it's uncertain whether or not society will go on. Can these three young adults save their existence, fix the crumbling planet, and discover the secret that has held the universe together for so long? Only time can tell. [Update schedule: approximately every other weekend] [Highest ranking: #43 Adventure (12/06/2014)]
Dystopia: Unchained Fate by MsRhode
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A hundred million years ago a rumored night where all vile and treacherous deeds gather in one place. The place where the tainted or currently known as the redden moon will bring misfortune to all kingdom where it shine the brightest and soon will call forth the keys to open the gates of a new world.
10:30, The Day Before Yesterday by NerissaMcC
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~ SEQUEL TO Cross ~ Something strange is going on in New York. First, the robbery of twenty tonnes of fireworks leaves the police baffled. Now, someone is kidnapping and brutally murdering teenage girls. The only clue they have is a sentence one of the victims survived long enough to pass on to the police - "10:30, the day before yesterday". Col. Jackson Brown is sending Dani Tamari and David Cross to New York, because they spent the most time around the De Mons, and would be able to recognise them. Now Dani's in a city she knows nothing about, surrounded by people she knows nothing about. Someone has a score to settle with Dani and David over how the two of them almost destroyed their plans. And they've got the President on their side. Cover by @PinkParisianPrincess
Forbidden Darkness (Whispers Prequel #1) by SilverOrchid77
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The Whisper race had always been feared and gazed upon with suspicion. Being led by their fear, the Kitsune race, the hierarchy of all the races, controlled the Whispers, forcing them into slavery so they could keep a close eye on their actions. The abilities that the Whispers possessed were still a mystery to the other races, their shadowy appearances and mysterious nature only furthered the distrust of the Kitsunes. When the young Kitsune Princess, Thyatira, falls in love with one of the Whisper slaves in her castle, Tanoan, they must keep their love a secret as Thyatira is already betrothed to marry the Kitsune, Nadir. The love she has for a Whisper is the greatest betrayal she could bestow upon the kingdom. Will Thyatira be able to change the age old beliefs of all three races? Cover by: JadeEmelee Copyright: All rights reserved. Therefore, I retain all the rights provided by copyright law, such as distribution, performance, and creation of the work. Parts of my work can only be used in reviews or when making covers.
The Coffee Shop by SeekingSolace
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An underground musician with shaking hands and a writer with anxiety issues, both hoping to be unnoticed but end up bonding over a shared love for coffee and science fiction. He's soft spoken and level headed. She's shy, relying on her favorite books to be her outlet to the outside world. A short story told in a form of journal entries; about love, loss, heart break, and disease. Chicklit #209 Short Story #455