This is about how to improve your OC so that it's not too Mary Sue/Gary Stu. It also looks into tropes and cliches, overall helping with storytelling. OC reviews are also welcome for those that want their OCs to be checked. (OC REVIEWS ARE CLOSED) Note: Some chapters are very outdated!! I only just started updating some parts of them but I'll try to edit when I can. (Edited up to tip #7) Cover art by 薯子Imoko (ID: 1950701) on Pixiv Render by Saelyaz on DeviantArt Highest Ranking: #2 in Mary Sue 30/9/18 and #1 in advice 23/8/21

Awake. But the nightmare has not ended. It's simply been forgotten. With her memories wiped, Luna wakes up on an island all alone. Scared and fragile, she clings to the kindness offered to her by two demons. They take her in, and teach her magic! But the more Luna learns about magic, demons, and the world she's living in... the more she discovers of the corruption. The war! The past of suffering locked inside her memories... Determined to bring an end to the hate, the indifference, the mindless violence.... Luna sets out on a journey with the broken and lost; a family called Shadow Moon. Alone, everyone is fragile and helpless... but together, they can pull each other from the dark, and run towards the light ahead!! Together... Shadow Moon will change the world!! ... But at what cost? "I-I trusted you. I loved you for so long! I thought we were family! How could you take everything away from me like that?!" - Look out for character art, Fanart, animations and cosplays throughout the book! [inspired by the anime Fairy Tail] P.s. this story really means the worlds (including the demon/angel world!) to me so please leave comments to let me know what you think of it! I'd love any feedback! Thank you! BTW I have the whole story planned, including an ending, however, the editing process is slow due to Uni. I WILL finish this book, it will just take time. I hope you'll be patient with me and keep an eye out for updates! (C) All Characters are of my creation, anyone else of credibility who has separate (C) is listed below: Character (c) Galaxy Star Nova - @galaxystarnova (Initial creation and some development) Character (c) Katy Blackmyth Rose [No longer included in the book but has inspired the development of Echo Blackmyth Rose - Unknown username] Character (c) Aki Tomotsu - @LARGESTMAJORITEACUP (Initial creation, not development)