Critiqued
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Criteria {on hold} by Smilingpineapple
Criteria {on hold}
Smilingpineapple
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DISCLAIMER: I started this story when I was 13--it's pretty shitty and has plenty of grammar mistakes. I'm planning on going back at some point and editing/fixing it up, but for now.... Well, it kind of sucks. READ AT YOUR OWN RISK!!! Meet Jessica Blue. She and her best friend, Brooke, decide to make a list of criteria for the male specimen as they begin their freshman year of college. In order to be considered "date-worthy", a guy must contain at least 75% of the list. But should you really depend on some list to decide your fate with a guy? [Please note: I do not own the photo on the cover--I just found it and slapped a bunch of words on it--as well as of the photos used throughout the chapters, so credits go to their original owners on Tumblr or wherever.]
The Silent Healing by imsorryiwas12
The Silent Healing
imsorryiwas12
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  • Parts 1
"Andrea, please I love you." he begged. "I'm sorry, Hayden... I love you too, I really do I... I just don't love who I've become. Please, Hayden please help me be me again..." I cried. |UN-COMPLETED| I'm going to edit this ONLY because it's embarrassing the way it is it will not be completed
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The Clique Wars (Season 1 ) ~Draft Version~ Wattys2016 by MagicalWriterWonder
The Clique Wars (Season 1 ) ~Draft Version~ Wattys2016
MagicalWriterWonder
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  • Parts 1
Please Note --> } (Rough Draft Version) New life , New school for Tiffany Ray means fresh start . Moving to Sunnyville California in your fathers mansion all by yourself can be lonely. Your father is in New York with his new wife and daughter leaving you with all this responsibility . That's heartbreakin , but Tiffany's goal is too have fun and forget about all the problems on her chest and make new friends. What tiffany doesn't know is SunnyVille Middle School is full of Cliques . But theres only 2 cliques that are in war. The SingingBirds ruled by the talented and gorgeous singer Madeline . The Dancing Hawks ruled by the fierce and prettiest girl in school Jasmine What happens when one of the cliques encounters Tiffany. New friendships are form . Drama Drama Everywhere . This is The Clique Wars #DiverseLit #weareteenqueens
Embers by SageRadke
Embers
SageRadke
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  • Parts 17
What is a monster? It's something low, subhuman even. If a few monsters dropped off the face of the earth who would care? Society is better for it. Are you afraid? Maybe you should be. They're everywhere. With wings and terrifying powers. Would you kill a monster? If a horrifying creature loomed out of the darkness and you could end it, would you? Would you kill me?
Her Angel by ChristinaLee32
Her Angel
ChristinaLee32
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  • Parts 11
Warning this story is filled with romance, humor, and adventure, and you are bound to fall in love with it! Amy is on the run from evil creatures that want to sacrifice her to gain access back into heaven, a place where they have been banned from by the almighty himself. They can sense peoples innocence, which Amy has an abundance of, making her the perfect choice. After passing out from exhaustion, she is discovered a handsome man who tells her things that are almost impossible to believe. How could she possibly believe that her papa offered her into an arranged marriage? After those monsters murdered her family, and every one in her kingdom she has no one to turn to. Her home has been leveled by the fire those monsters wielded, so she has nothing left to lose. Gabriel is struck with her beauty and personality and is determined to win her. He vows to protect, love, and cherish her. There is a catch. First he has to get this feisty woman to submit.
Fatal Jeopardy by Salerno546
Fatal Jeopardy
Salerno546
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  • Parts 8
Carlos Romero seemingly has the perfect life until he finds a strange object that gives him unusual powers he has no control over. When a suspicious character shows up in his town looking for the strange object, he goes from being the most popular and best athlete to fighting a secret organization with evil intentions. Will Carlos be able to learn his newly given powers and protect his loved ones...not to mention himself!
Battle of the Captains by seakissed
Battle of the Captains
seakissed
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  • Parts 33
It started out as a game. She's everything a girl wants to be. He's everything a girl wants. As head cheerleader and quarterback, Kody Taylor and Austin Collins would normally be expected to be together with them being the schools Mr. and Ms. Perfect. Lucky for all the single boys and girls in their school, it'll never happen. They hate each other and they aren't afraid to show it. Not like it'll ruin their reputations anyway. If anything, it makes it better beacause people seem to enjoy the show. Will things change when they have to work together to keep their positions as head cheerleader and football captain? All their lives, everything between them has been just a competition. A challenge. A game. But what happens when it isn't just a game anymore?
Calypso by Vivinin
Calypso
Vivinin
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Some people say a coma is a deep sleep; no dreams, only emptiness. Others say a coma is a dream; a long, long dream. A lonely dream. Then there are those few who've experienced something beautiful during a coma, something precious, something filled with warmth. A stay so lovely they didn't want to ever leave. Something truly horrifying. Is it possible to fall in love with a creature you have to leave eventually, a girl who was your sole companion? Of course it is. Human beings get attached, after all. And if you get attached, you never want to leave it. Some people never leave. They choose to stay there forever, content with living with the beautiful thing that saved them. She had saved them, hadn't she? It really depends on who you ask. Those few have experienced something no one should have to experience. She is as perfect as she is flawed. She is as much an angel as she is a devil. She can be your best friend, or your worst enemy. She is as gentle as she is cruel. She is Calypso. Calypso is the one who decides if you live or die. She is the sole thing that balances your life. As long as you are in her hands, you will always be her puppet, her marionette. Of course, you can always stay with her. Forever. After all, Calypso gets attached easily.
The Dirty Truth About Love by goldenvirginia
The Dirty Truth About Love
goldenvirginia
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When I was younger I used to wonder if you were predestined to be the person you are, or if it's your childhood that moulds you into the adult you become. Then I realised it didn't really matter. 'Cause either way I was always gonna be fucked.
Nine Lives by Cup1dsLov3
Nine Lives
Cup1dsLov3
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Every soul must taste… Death! Kahn Lancer, being the successor to his father’s kingdom and Death’s throne, is out to tie a loose end – Lexa Drayton. The same Lexa Drayton meant to die tewnty years ago, the same Lexa Drayton who somehow manages to survive Death’s attempts to suck her soul out of her body. Call these strokes of luck, flukes, blessings or even good fortunes but Death does not like to be cheated. Will Lexa keep on running for the rest of her life or will Death finally have his way and snatch her soul away from her? How much time does she have before the sand in her hour glass actually runs out? Copyrighted to Kiara Matthews - All rights reserved. Many Thanks to @Pikimonchu for the new description! :D A new friend for life :D