Books I Am Giving Feedback On
8 stories
The Cracks in the Labyrinth by ChristianNava0
ChristianNava0
  • WpView
    Reads 70,931
  • WpVote
    Votes 5,446
  • WpPart
    Parts 50
Evoking the paranoid tension of Rosemary's Baby and the unnerving atmosphere of the cult horror film Jacob's Ladder, The Cracks in the Labyrinth is a disturbing psychological thriller set in present-day Caracas, where the government has devolved into a "democratic dictatorship"-a creepy suspense novel meant to challenge your deeper, subconscious fears of losing control. It consumed the sanity of an entire country... And it was not from this world. It couldn't have been. Whatever caused the incident known as "The Red Christmas" drove Venezuela into madness. Even ten years since it happened, none of the survivors of that night dare to attempt to make sense of it all, including Adam. Living ostracized to hide from the brutal way of life in Caracas, he's working tirelessly as an online writer to help his brother and sister flee the country. Now, as he's about to have enough money to take them to safety, he receives an email from his old girlfriend ... which is remarkable, considering she's been presumed dead for years. Adam tries to think nothing of the email or the broken video file attached to it. He convinces himself that it has to be a computer virus of some kind until he discovers something terrifying: the video might link his sister to the worst night of his life, the night his girlfriend went missing, the night of "The Red Christmas". Then he realizes this could be a threat; his sister's life could be in danger. As he starts to investigate who sent the video, Adam begins to uncover dark truths about his neighbors and finds evidence that there might be a larger conspiracy at play. The problem is that he's starting to suffer from hellish hallucinations that make him question what is real. Soon, the only clear thing to him is that someone doesn't want him to dig up the past. Will Adam be able to stay sane long enough to find out what really happened the night of "The Red Christmas"? Will he succeed in helping his family escape the country?
Tears' Curse by LindaLsc
LindaLsc
  • WpView
    Reads 2,793
  • WpVote
    Votes 156
  • WpPart
    Parts 6
"Why do we need to protect the mortals? They no longer trust us!" "Because this is our oath." Xue Er, a 1000-year-old white dragon from Long Sheng Jie has been sent to the current mortals' world to protect it from evil forces. Living under the name of Miracle, she begins her journey. But because mortals no longer believe in the existence of dragons, she cannot use her elements as much as she wishes to. When she thought she finally saved a mortal from becoming the fourth victim, things turn more complicated as she learns the truth behind her birth. What exactly is going on? Will Miracle be able to complete her mission in the world of mortality? Or will she be the next death of her species? ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- -(β€’β€’Γ· πŸŽ€ π’œπ’Έπ’½π’Ύπ‘’π“‹π‘’π“‚π‘’π“ƒπ“‰π“ˆ πŸŽ€ Γ·β€’β€’(- 2020 -) Gem-ers Awards (1𝔰𝔱 𝔒𝔑𝔦𝔱𝔦𝔬𝔫), π”‰π”žπ”«π”±π”žπ”°π”Ά 𝔴𝔦𝔫𝔫𝔒𝔯, 2𝔫𝔑 π”­π”©π”žπ” π”’ The Belle Ame Awards (2𝔫𝔑 𝔒𝔑𝔦𝔱𝔦𝔬𝔫), π”‰π”žπ”«π”±π”žπ”°π”Ά 𝔴𝔦𝔫𝔫𝔒𝔯, 2𝔫𝔑 π”­π”©π”žπ” π”’ The Zodiac Awards 2020, π”‰π”žπ”«π”±π”žπ”°π”Ά 𝔴𝔦𝔫𝔫𝔒𝔯, 2𝔫𝔑 π”­π”©π”žπ” π”’ Library Awards 2020, π”‰π”žπ”«π”±π”žπ”°π”Ά 𝔴𝔦𝔫𝔫𝔒𝔯, 2𝔫𝔑 π”­π”©π”žπ” π”’ Paper Awards, (1𝔰𝔱 𝔒𝔑𝔦𝔱𝔦𝔬𝔫), π”‰π”žπ”«π”±π”žπ”°π”Ά 𝔴𝔦𝔫𝔫𝔒𝔯, 3𝔯𝔑 π”­π”©π”žπ” π”’ The High Peaks Awards (1𝔰𝔱 𝔒𝔑𝔦𝔱𝔦𝔬𝔫), π”‰π”žπ”«π”±π”žπ”°π”Ά 𝔴𝔦𝔫𝔫𝔒𝔯, 3𝔯𝔑 π”­π”©π”žπ” π”’ SilverLavender Awards (1𝔰𝔱 𝔒𝔑𝔦𝔱𝔦𝔬𝔫), π”‰π”žπ”«π”±π”žπ”°π”Ά 𝔴𝔦𝔫𝔫𝔒𝔯, 3𝔯𝔑 π”­π”©π”žπ” π”’ The Creory Awards (1𝔰𝔱 𝔒𝔑𝔦𝔱𝔦𝔬𝔫), π”‰π”žπ”«π”±π”žπ”°π”Ά 𝔴𝔦𝔫𝔫𝔒𝔯, 3𝔯𝔑
Clover Hawkings and the Triwizard Tournament by SermiaMagistre
SermiaMagistre
  • WpView
    Reads 2,190
  • WpVote
    Votes 260
  • WpPart
    Parts 38
β˜…It's not too late to by happy again β˜… α΄„Κœα΄€Κ€ΚŸΙͺᴇ α΄‘Ιͺʟʟᴏᴑ is dead- murdered by a former accomplice. The movement she left behind, however, is very much alive. Fifteen-year-old α΄„ΚŸα΄α΄ α΄‡Κ€ Κœα΄€α΄‘α΄‹Ιͺɴɒꜱ has gone through alot. Too much. There's a deadly secret in her mind that wants out. She believes running from her dark past is the solution, but she's about to find out that one can only run for so long before the past catches up with you. α΄„α΄€κœ±κœ± α΄‘Ιͺʟʟᴏᴑ has the key to change everything. She's heard the whispers of the Dark Lord rising, and knows she should honor her sister's sacrifice and tell the Order. But what happens when the delay, or lack thereof, means the world on one side and the ones she loves on the other? α΄›Κœα΄‡ α΄›Κ€Ιͺα΄‘Ιͺα΄’α΄€Κ€α΄… α΄›α΄α΄œΚ€Ι΄α΄€α΄α΄‡Ι΄α΄› is happening again at Hogwarts, but Harry isn't the only one who has a problem with it. Just like Harry isn't the only one the Dark Lord has his sights on. Clover and Cass (but mostly Clover) have many choices to make as she navigates friendship, love, mystery and her biggest enemy- herself. THIRD PLACE IN THE AMETHYST AWARDS THIRD PLACE IN THE ADMIRATION AWARDS THIRD PLACE IN THE ADORE YOU AWARDS This story has a graphic made by @AmansRose
End of Winter (Rewrite & Expansions into Book Four) by TimothyWillard
TimothyWillard
  • WpView
    Reads 30,038
  • WpVote
    Votes 1,249
  • WpPart
    Parts 94
First they survived a serial killer in their own barracks. Then they went to the wall against a pre-conflict strike of Soviet Union soldiers attacking them in their own barracks, leaving behind half of their number dead and the survivors of the brutal close quarters combat shell shocked and physically wounded. Criminal Investigation Division, the National Security Agency, the Defense Intelligence Agency, the FBI, and the CIA are all interested in what went on. Accompanying the members of the Alphabet Agencies is the aide of a member of the House Military Affairs Commission and members of the Secret Service. All of them wanted to know what happened. Unfortunately for them, the blood spilled on the mountain in the name of madness and hatred has woken it from its ancient slumber. And it wants more. THIS STORY IS A ROUGH DRAFT/STREAM OF CONSCIOUSNESS VERSION OF WHAT WILL EVENTUALLY BE EDITED AND EXPANDED INTO BOOK FOUR OF THE PUBLISHED SERIES.
Genos Suspicion by Ihateusernamesalott
Ihateusernamesalott
  • WpView
    Reads 1,175
  • WpVote
    Votes 24
  • WpPart
    Parts 7
In this story you're Avery. Not only did your village just get blown to bits due to the heroes but you're also secretly half human half monster. You had lived most of your life in that village but had heard rumors that Z City was a ghost town only inhabited by monster. Seeing as you were mistrusting of humans, the idea appealed to you and started heading toward the "abandoned city". Little did you know your fate would soon intertwine with both Saitama and his disciple Genos. Instead of having y/n all the time I choose a name for you already just to make it easier. This is my first fanfic and I'm dyslexic so please feel free to point out any typos as I always check but sometimes still miss them. This will also be a 7 chapter story. Rating wise: PG-13 Genre: Light romance, Action, Comedy Enjoy!!!
The Divine Machine by jwrcreative
jwrcreative
  • WpView
    Reads 695
  • WpVote
    Votes 114
  • WpPart
    Parts 19
In the beginning, there were none but the Eternal Machines, robotic angels gifted with unlimited potential. Together, they forged a realm of unparalleled beauty and unlocked the secrets of creation. But as new realms are born and new races begin to appear, a prophecy emerges. Destined to rise from among the Eternal Machines, the Unmaker will usher in an age of war and threaten to end existence itself. As the wisest and most powerful of the Eternal Machines, Valos, Arkadon, Gildimir, and Celestia vow to do everything they can to prevent this dark future. Ultimately, their efforts will fail. One of them will fall. And the future of the Divine Machine will never be the same. Cover by @Nonfictionism-
Thirty Nine Minutes (COMPLETE) by Cags1987
Cags1987
  • WpView
    Reads 16,783
  • WpVote
    Votes 1,173
  • WpPart
    Parts 28
Helen Newman had beaten hundreds of other candidates, and signed dozens of NDAs for the chance to work here. Now, finally, she takes her first step into the basement of the government building. In her wildest dreams, she never thought she would be assigned to help a merman overcome his fear of deep water. However, she sees a much bigger plot at work enacted by his keepers, one that goes far beyond just the surface.