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Elephant Reviews [CFCU] by Elephant_reviews
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Matthew and the Chimney Sweeps: Book One (Completed, Editing) by matthewchimneysweeps
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2021 and 2022 Editor's Picks Cover by : @Guinealove2005 Matthew, an orphaned safe-cracking wiz of a boy, is being held prisoner in an old folk's home where he is forced to counterfeit money. However, on a stormy night, Matthew is rescued by a crime-fighting troupe of child chimney sweeps and is swept away to the big city of Spring Heights to live on a half-sunken boat. In the city, Matthew is introduced to other orphaned children who live on the streets, cleans chimneys with his new family, flees for his life across rooftops, rescues other children and tries to find out the whereabouts of a mean woman connected to his incarceration at the old folk's home. He also races carts down a hill, a popular pastime of the street children of Spring Heights, where not dying or getting injured is a good outcome. ***Official Wattpad Reading Lists featured in: Superhero -- February reading list Adventure -- Middle-grade reading list Undiscovered Stories -- Thrill Seekers reading list Wattpad Urban -- Urban Fantasy reading list Children's Fiction -- Age 10 - 12 English Crime -- Kicking Ass &Taking Names Fantasy -- Middle Grade and Children's Fantasy Fantasy -- Featured Fantasy Stories Action -- Adventure in Action General Fiction -- Live Life While You Can Superhero -- No Power, No Problem
Soul of Shadows | Eternal Bonds: Book 2  by WondaGal
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*Book 2 in the Eternal Bonds Series* *Sequel to Blood of Darkness* *Inspired by Hades and Persephone* ~*~ "Sometimes in our darkest moments...we just need to know our family is there." ~*~ It's been three weeks since Stefan Drake left Blackfell. Three weeks away from his family. Stefan's desire to stay away coupled with his immense pain over the loss of someone close to him sends him into a vicious downward spiral. But without any of his family around, who or what will bring him back and help him heal? ~*~ Sorina Drake has spent the last three weeks helping Selena Mercer get ready for her wedding. But she's also been spending more time with Mason Wilder, the attractive Hunter that is staying in Cygnus Keep. Will Sorina finally accept her feelings for Mason and will Mason finally be able to get rid of his Hunter identity? ~*~ Cover by @SophieSlape and text separators by @Kjstudios19
Blood of Darkness | Eternal Bonds: Book 1 by WondaGal
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*Book 1 in the Eternal Bonds Series* *Inspired by Hades and Persephone* ~*~ "Sometimes death isn't the end. Sometimes people come back." ~*~ Selena Silvers is an ordinary girl who loves to paint. She goes to school and works at a bookshop in Blackfell. Pretty ordinary. Except for two tiny details. One, she has an extraordinary ability to feel the emotions of those around her. Two, almost every night when she closes her eyes, she sees a gorgeous man with hair as black as night and eyes as gray as the sea after a storm. The problem is that she has no idea who he is or even if he's real. Will she ever find out? And what other secrets are hiding in the darkness of the night? ~*~ Damien Drake is the eldest of the six Drake siblings and is forced to take the throne after his Father is murdered. Oh and the fun part? He's a vampire surrounded by all the darkness that comes with being one. Dealing with loss has never been Damien's strong suit and he's gotten to a point where he forces himself to bury all of his emotions deep down and builds his walls up so high. Will his siblings or anyone else be able to reach him? And will he ever defeat the person responsible for his Father's death? ~*~ Cover by @SophieSlape and text separators by @Kjstudios19
Crystal Clear - Treasure Chest Reviews & Graphics [Hiring/Open] by AnnaKosalla
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Of Sinners & Saints - 1st Book of the; A Tale Of Love & Hate saga by sinrathor
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When a baby survives the night annihilation the Enlighted Being Ahura Rwyn along with his brother Raziel and his young apprentice Dummah put this baby into hiding. The big question was why did this child survive when his whole clan was massacred by whom? No clue was known. All that is known after the massacre of the Magia clan is this. Ahura has the mark of the father. He must live to plant the seed. If he dies existence will cease to exist.