*ALERT* THIS IS THE UNEDITED VERSION OF DYING BREATH *ALERT* The edited version has begun to be posted so if you wish to read those chapters, feel free too. The plot is the same but the writing is much better. SUMMARY: When Sarah falls sick unexpectedly and learns she is on her death bed, her teenage nemesis reappears still willing to offer her her dreams. Will she accept or act the part of an idiot and reject immortality?

Desolation is suicidal, very suicidal. Having taken her life countless times, she never remains dead. Death after death she seeks answers as to why she is as cursed as the lands she resides in. A land called Everlasting. A land cursed to never see Rhyun, the sun. Ruled by the Immortal Lord, Everlasting has remained in the shadows for centuries, and its occupants tremble in the rule of Lord Jerrath, the Immortal Lord who spirits away a bride every moons' turn. The brides never survive the pull of death; until Lord Jerrath meets Desolation. Desolation has a power that goes beyond eternal resurrection, her very gaze brings death. What happens when an Immortal Lord encounters a self-resurrecting being, whose gaze brings destruction to all who meet her eye? Perhaps return Rhuyn's light.

Years later, Sarah returns to the Goblin Kingdom older and wiser. King Jareth wants revenge. Can she make a lonely Goblin King realize that some things are much better than revenge, like love? Nothing to do with any of my other Labyrinth stories.

She may have freed her brother, but Sarah isn't free. The peach allows Jareth to claim her and force back to the Underground. Now Jareth must make her marry him or..

Aspiring writer Norah Jacobs needs an escape. In the span of two weeks, her corrupt brother has been jailed for murder and his partner has been hovering on her doorstep, threatening to ruin what little peace she has left. Packing her car, Norah flees the city and goes off the grid, finding refuge in the small coastal town of Bellvale. However, Norah's newfound refuge lands her right in the middle of a power struggle between creatures she thought only existed in fairy tales, and she begins to see that no matter how hard you try to run from your troubles, they seem to have a way of catching up with you... Watty 2014 Winner Haven Copyright © Melissa Lucas 2013 All Rights Reserved. No part of this literary work may be reproduced or used without written consent from the author.

WRITER'S NOTE: Hi, I just wanted to notify you really quickly that I'm actually rewriting this ENTIRE series, considering I was twelve when I started it and I was fourteen when I left everyone hanging. I have released the prologue to the book which is only about two pages long. I will try to release at least one chapter a week, meaning a new chapter will be coming up tomorrow or at the very least this weekend. The book is simply named Daughter of the Labyrinth (The Rewritten) It would mean the world to me if you checked it out and let me know if you like it Thanks for reading When the young Sarah saved her baby brother and returned home, She kept thinking about the labyrinth and Jareth. One night when she was 19 years old she wished to visit Jareth in his castle and became pregnant without Jareth knowing. When the baby was born she decided to name the girl Thelma Lind but sent the child away to a small unnoticable country in the north known as Iceland. When the girl is turning 12 turning 13 she starts to feel strange.She watched a movie called Labyrinth and she felt a slight connection to it. She had never resembled her siblings nor her parents. Both her parents had always had bright hair but she had a lovely golden blonde, and her parents were quite small. Then her parents inform her that she is adopted and was to spend time with her birth mother that night. Sarah had always wanted to protect Thelma from Jareth's cruel ways but what happens when Jareth finds out that Sarah has been hiding her from him...

I only recommend this story for people who have seen, understood, and enjoyed the 1986 movie Labyrinth, starring David Bowie(and his awesomeness) as Jareth-the villain-and Jennifer Connelly as Sarah-the main character. For those of you who haven't, watch it before reading this story my amazing brain came up with. Sarah and her friends return in this amazing new adventure, Labyrinth 2: Jareth's Comeback. The all-powerful(and totally frightening) Jareth has returned in need of a bride; a young maiden to assist Jareth's rule in the new era of the goblin kingdom! Alas, the only girl Jareth would ever settle for is Sarah, and it will always be that way. But Sarah-even though she had fallen for him with the help of his tricks in the previous adventure-still sees this magic-wielder as an uncaring, selfish, cruel man. But the truth is...he never wanted Toby. He never would've harmed him, the whole thing was done with a decoy. All he wanted was Sarah. Through dangers untold, and hardships unnumbered, Jareth will find a way into Sarah's heart once again, even though her will is as strong as his, and her kingdom as great. But worst of all, he may not find a way, for he has no power over her... *new cover created by abyss-of-crazy*