Eleven years after the birth of Luke and Leia Skywalker, their father ,Anakin, is faced with his greatest challenge yet; training his children. When the Skywalker family is assigned a mission to defeat the Sith once and for all, they will experience the trials of physical and emotional. Will their strong family bond be tested to its limit? Find out in this exciting sequel to What Could Have Been.

Disclaimer I wrote this when I was 16, but a million books later imma stick beside it. This is just a couple things I notice in books that make them difficult to read. I included examples and ways to fix them. Threw in a little humor and if you ignore my grammar errors it's got some great tips. Enjoy!

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