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They were murdered. They were clothed with blood. They are now Less Than Seven.

Their love was indefinitely hopeless. The romance was forbidden for curious Eda Boek, an eighteen-year-old girl who didn't know a thing about love, and still abided by her strict parent's rules. No dating, kissing, obviously meaning sex was off the table for her secret lover Kane Diletto. And so, her bad-boy left her in shambles and never sought for her. Eight more years pass, Eda isn't the girl she once was. She's a woman. She's rebelled, ran away from her home to a big city, found a passion for writing, and met people who could change her life for better or for worse. Her dilemma: she's fired. Also broke (and broken up with.) She sets off for work but discovers a strange yet hopeful proposition. Soon Eda finds herself chose as a perfect candidate for a sexy billionaire's baby mama. The money would support her living and aid her in achieving her dream to pursue writing. Eda never dreamed of motherhood or marriage, lucky for her, all she must do is produce one healthy baby-while staying in a luxury mansion. It's a no strings attached deal. Even when sparks fly, Eda denies her feelings to keep things somewhat professional or maybe, for other hidden reasons. This should be incredibly easy...Or so she thought. When a sworn nemesis, intense temptations, pregnancy hormones, a gorgeous ex, plus dangerous secrets with a baby on the way are all thrown into the mix, you'll understand why it's tragic in the end.

"Why do we need to protect the mortals? They no longer trust us!" "Because this is our oath." Xue Er, a 1000-year-old white dragon from Long Sheng Jie has been sent to the current mortals' world to protect it from evil forces. Living under the name of Miracle, she begins her journey. But because mortals no longer believe in the existence of dragons, she cannot use her elements as much as she wishes to. When she thought she finally saved a mortal from becoming the fourth victim, things turn more complicated as she learns the truth behind her birth. What exactly is going on? Will Miracle be able to complete her mission in the world of mortality? Or will she be the next death of her species? ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- -(••÷ 🎀 𝒜𝒸𝒽𝒾𝑒𝓋𝑒𝓂𝑒𝓃𝓉𝓈 🎀 ÷••(- 2020 -) Gem-ers Awards (1𝔰𝔱 𝔢𝔡𝔦𝔱𝔦𝔬𝔫), 𝔉𝔞𝔫𝔱𝔞𝔰𝔶 𝔴𝔦𝔫𝔫𝔢𝔯, 2𝔫𝔡 𝔭𝔩𝔞𝔠𝔢 The Belle Ame Awards (2𝔫𝔡 𝔢𝔡𝔦𝔱𝔦𝔬𝔫), 𝔉𝔞𝔫𝔱𝔞𝔰𝔶 𝔴𝔦𝔫𝔫𝔢𝔯, 2𝔫𝔡 𝔭𝔩𝔞𝔠𝔢 The Zodiac Awards 2020, 𝔉𝔞𝔫𝔱𝔞𝔰𝔶 𝔴𝔦𝔫𝔫𝔢𝔯, 2𝔫𝔡 𝔭𝔩𝔞𝔠𝔢 Library Awards 2020, 𝔉𝔞𝔫𝔱𝔞𝔰𝔶 𝔴𝔦𝔫𝔫𝔢𝔯, 2𝔫𝔡 𝔭𝔩𝔞𝔠𝔢 Paper Awards, (1𝔰𝔱 𝔢𝔡𝔦𝔱𝔦𝔬𝔫), 𝔉𝔞𝔫𝔱𝔞𝔰𝔶 𝔴𝔦𝔫𝔫𝔢𝔯, 3𝔯𝔡 𝔭𝔩𝔞𝔠𝔢 The High Peaks Awards (1𝔰𝔱 𝔢𝔡𝔦𝔱𝔦𝔬𝔫), 𝔉𝔞𝔫𝔱𝔞𝔰𝔶 𝔴𝔦𝔫𝔫𝔢𝔯, 3𝔯𝔡 𝔭𝔩𝔞𝔠𝔢 SilverLavender Awards (1𝔰𝔱 𝔢𝔡𝔦𝔱𝔦𝔬𝔫), 𝔉𝔞𝔫𝔱𝔞𝔰𝔶 𝔴𝔦𝔫𝔫𝔢𝔯, 3𝔯𝔡 𝔭𝔩𝔞𝔠𝔢 The Creory Awards (1𝔰𝔱 𝔢𝔡𝔦𝔱𝔦𝔬𝔫), 𝔉𝔞𝔫𝔱𝔞𝔰𝔶 𝔴𝔦𝔫𝔫𝔢𝔯, 3𝔯𝔡

In the realm of Palasia, where the Silver Church's iron grip extends across the continent, the conquered Illuri people still cling to the old ways, praying to spirits that have grown quiet. At the heart of this struggle are four souls bound by fate: Nodalen, a princess burdened by the weight of her bloodline and a legacy of obedience; Liwani, a boy worshipped as a living spirit among the Illuri, yearning to break free from the sacred expectations that imprison him; Clay, a young warrior trapped in the cruel affections of the corrupt electun, desperate for a chance at redemption or escape; and Mary, who views the world through a lens of survival, poised to defy the forces that would see her subjugated. The Silver Church drowns sinners publicly to cleanse them of their sins, wielding faith as both shield and sword. Yet even as their grip tightens, a terrible threat rises. The cult of the Lord of Souls, a mysterious order promising eternal life, begins to swell in numbers, sowing discord in a land already teetering on the edge of chaos. As rebellion brews and the Silver Church's gaze turns inward, alliances are forged in blood, and secrets long buried begin to surface. From the frigid dungeons of Silvertown, where sinners face their watery fate, to the sunlit shores of the Illuri, where ancient rituals persist, Palasia is a land steeped in violence and deceit. Kings and commoners alike are caught in a web of treachery spun by those who crave power and those who would see it crumble. As Nodalen, Liwani, Clay, and Mary navigate the ever-changing tides of loyalty and betrayal, they are drawn toward a reckoning that will test their resolve and reshape their fates. For within the shadows of Palasia lies a hidden truth, a place where all blood flows, where sins are sown and reaped -- a garden of blood that nourishes the roots of a darker age long prophesied.

"Death does not discriminate between the sinners and the saints. It just takes and takes." ~~~ the maze runner meets 1984 ~~~ The year is 2052. Rayla Sallow is a computer genius. Amara Wintergreen is a refugee. Zahara Griffith is a fighter. Their world is broken. Mysterious monsters have overrun the planet and humanity has fallen. They are fighting for a better life. Fighting to overthrow the corrupt government that rose out of the ashes of destruction and death. But what happens when the treachery goes even deeper then they had imagined? When nothing is as it seems? Will they be able to find the truth beneath all the lies or will their world forever crumble into dust? ~~~ ♡ Lovely cover and end of chapter graphics made by @Guinealove2005 !!!! ♡

Don Vasco, the blonde son of the fallen angel Azazel, made a deal to live on earth in exchange to be the agent of hell. He lived through battles-let it be war between Heaven and Hell or World wars, the internal battle he endured from the deaths of the people he loved- which scarred him but won't break his spirit. After two centuries, He meets and falls for a local famous punk star, Mallory. Despite their differences, The two share something in common: Both are rebels at heart. Unfortunate chain of events unfolds as their relationship blossoms and his identity suffers exposure. Humans become more hopeless as the world gradually crumbles and an impending doom approaches. (Book Cover made by me)

Arabella has always called herself unlucky. With mediocre grades, a broken car and few friends, people agreed with her. What happens when ex con, Lincoln, kidnaps Arabella and enlists her to pose as his wife? -His fingers are so tight around my throat that it is hard for me to focus on anything else. I keep thinking about the gun and knives that he had on him. "let's fucking go. move it." He spat and waved his gun towards the car.-

How do we live and love when we know that everything we have will turn into ashes? Now that Zcyhie Elizabeth Fleuvis is back, someone threatens to inflict everything in her normal, stable life. The tranquility of her old town, Stygian Realm, along Fleuvis' life is shattered by the discovery of her killer. Entering the thrilling domain, spins an unforgettable story of love and loss. [COMPLETED]