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Just One Drop (Completed) by MissBluePen
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Maurice had never thought of giving up when it comes to Ross, the man she's into. Unfortunately, Ross sees her as a little troublemaker who pesters his pretty little life. To make matters worse, Ross is in love with Macey, her greatest enemy. Little did she know, just one drop could change everything. Just one drop. On a weird day, she met Audrey, a mysterious girl who offered her of granting what she always wanted. The next thing she knew, things started to get messier than it already were. She finally got what she wanted, but she knew everything was fake. Could this be another be-careful-what-you-wish-for story? A story quite a fairytale without a fairy and a little something more - a witch maybe. --- LANGUAGE: FILIPINO GENRE: FANTASY, NEW ADULT, ROMANCE
Astral Travel by Sufokante
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Ang mga magulang ni Scott ay isa sa tinatawag na "Astral Traveler." Sila ay may kakayahang makalabas mula sa kanilang pisikal na katawan at largadong nakapaglalakbay sa lugar na tinatawag na "Astral Plane." Ngunit dahil sa aksidenteng nangyari dulot ng mga masasamang nilalang ay binawian sila ng buhay at sa kaarawan mismo ng kanilang anak. Dahil dito ay hindi na nila nagawa pang ibigay ang regalo nilang Libro at kwintas. Sa edad na disiotso, nakaranas ang binatilyong si Scott ng isang 'di pangkaraniwang panaginip sa mismong araw ng death anniversary ng kaniyang mga magulang. Ang araw din na iyon ay itinatakdang babago sa kaniyang pangkaraniwang buhay sapagkat makikilala niya ang isang matanda at babaeng gagabay at tutulong sa kanyang pagsasapalaran sa panibagong mundo na kaniyang haharapin. Sasamahan siya ng kaniyang kapwa manlalakbay kasama na roon ang kaibigan niyang sina Andrew at Kevin. Samantala, habang hindi pa nabuksan ang lugusang pilit dinadasal ng mga tao, walang kakayahan ang mga masasamang nilalang na manakit o kaya'y makapaglalakbay sa pisikal na mundo. Anu-ano kaya ang kakayahang taglay ni Scott kung bakit ito naging espesyal? Matitigilan niya ba ang mga taong pilit dinadasal ang mahikang nakapagbubukas ng lagusan? O tuluyang babalutin ang ibang mundo nang panibago?
Losing To Win (Lost Series #1) | Completed by keysaya_
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Felicie Tarcelo is a woman who loves to compete. The reason? It's because she believes that she will never lose. Confidence fuels her competitiveness, as competitiveness drives her to win, and winning feeds her satisfaction as it makes her achieve things. With her head always held high, people often see her presumptuous. But their opinions do not matter, and will never be. She had built her egocentric personality well, that there will be no words that can make her fall. She will not fall, she will not lose. . . Not until fate become unpredictable. Losing become inevitable. She met him, a man who is a total opposite of her. He never cared about achieveing things, instead, he prioritizes surviving life. Winning is his only option to survive, and he doesn't want to lose. He really would not want to, for the only remaining things he has will be at risk. Winning is both their will, and fate thrown them on battlefield where they are the biggest rivals. One must lose in order for the other one to win. In their battle, the question is: Who's going to lose, when the meaning of winning become redefined? ***
A Vivir Mi Vida Contigo by springparawie
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Istorya ng magkasintahang mula sa makabagong panahon, Rhys Mabini at Erika Flores, na mapupunta sa sinaunang panahon upang baguhin ang kapalaran ng dalawang tao na hinadlangan ang pag-iibigan. Sa loob lamang ng labing-apat na araw at gabi, magawa kaya nilang magtagumpay sa kanilang misyon? Date Started: October 2019 Date Finished: March 16, 2020