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In a twist of fate, the destinies of Karna, Arjuna, and Suyodhan intertwine on the 17th day after the death of Karna, as their memories are transported to their minds when they are at the pivotal stages of their lives. Karna, the anti-hero with an unwavering sense of loyalty; Arjuna, the skilled archer and arguably the hero of the epic filled with wrath due to suffering inflicted on them by his relatives; and Suyodhan, the antagonist whose choices led to the death of all whom he held dear, find themselves reliving their lives from a pivotal point. One of them swore off the war to protect his brothers, another swore to destroy any seeds of war and the third was left confused when there was no target to point his bow at. This is a bit controversial fic. But please give this a try.

He turned, and stared at the face of his brother. Suddenly he was not in the Royal Palace, but lying on the battlefield, taking his last breaths, with his mother sobbing and holding him in his lap. His brothers crying and apologizing, all mourning his death. At that time, he had realized how different their future could have been, And how futile their enmity was. . . . . . . Now he had another chance. One he did not intend to slip away from him. . . . Follow the journey of Karna as he navigates through the conspiracies, politics and rivalries to prevent the destruction and bloodshed brought by Mahabharat. All over again.

♪♪Mahabharat♪♪ A Tale of Smiles & Tears, Love & Hatred, Peace & Wars. Warriors are born to fight for justice, for Kinship, for Glorious Victory to withhold the honor of their ancestors and protect their subjects. However none of these would ever be able to soothe a mother's heart, specially when she knows her silence can become the reason of her own son's death. This is an alternative universe. A story what would have happened if Queen Kunti did reveal the truth to her sons before it was too late. But Karna knows every debt must be repaid. Witness the journey of Pandava warriors as they fights to win their brother, an ally, a forgiveness for a mother's mistake. 'I Will Be Your Death Prince Arjun' 'The Great Vishma Is Wrong!' 'Go away Charioteer.' 'Wait, Archer!' •°•°"Blood Is Indeed Thicker Than Water." •°•°•

What if Krishna decided to interfere and make Shakuni lose control of his dice when Karna and Arjuna were being bided causing Karna to become Arjuna's slave? What if destiny changed it's course after that win? Let us see what changes will occur to the Epic of Mahabharata when Karna is now the slave of the Pandavas. A/N - This is a fanfiction based on my imagination. It is not meant to offend anyone or the original epic. In this story Karna has no family and is an orphan. He also does not realize he is the slave of the Pandavas since he is not present during the Dyut Sabha.

*╔═══❖•ೋ° °ೋ•❖═══╗* ᴀ ʀᴇ-ɪɴᴠᴇɴᴛɪᴏɴ ᴏꜰ 'ᴀ ʟᴏᴠᴇ ᴀᴄʀᴏꜱꜱ ᴛɪᴍᴇ' ᴀɴᴅ 'ᴀ ᴛᴀʟᴇ ᴀꜱ ᴏʟᴅ ᴀꜱ ᴛɪᴍᴇ'. *╚═══❖•ೋ° °ೋ•❖═══╝ 𝘈 𝘍𝘶𝘵𝘶𝘳𝘦 𝘚𝘩𝘰𝘸𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘔𝘢𝘤𝘩𝘪𝘯𝘦, 𝘚𝘪𝘹 𝘎𝘪𝘳𝘭𝘴, 𝘛𝘩𝘳𝘦𝘦 𝘪𝘯𝘤𝘢𝘳𝘯𝘢𝘵𝘦𝘥 𝘸𝘪𝘵𝘩 𝘧𝘶𝘭𝘭 𝘮𝘦𝘮𝘰𝘳𝘪𝘦𝘴 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘛𝘩𝘳𝘦𝘦 𝘣𝘰𝘶𝘨𝘩𝘵 𝘣𝘢𝘤𝘬 𝘪𝘯 𝘵𝘩𝘦𝘪𝘳 𝘢𝘤𝘵𝘶𝘢𝘭 𝘪𝘥𝘦𝘯𝘵𝘪𝘵𝘺 ---- 𝘞𝘩𝘢𝘵 𝘤𝘩𝘢𝘰𝘴 𝘢𝘳𝘦 𝘵𝘩𝘦𝘺 𝘨𝘰𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘵𝘰 𝘣𝘳𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘪𝘯 𝘋𝘸𝘢𝘱𝘢𝘳 𝘠𝘶𝘨𝘢? ᴏɴ ᴏɴᴇ ʜᴀɴᴅ ᴄʜᴏꜱᴇɴ ᴋᴜʀᴜ ᴘʀɪɴᴄᴇꜱ ᴀɴᴅ ᴛʜᴇɪʀ ʙʀᴀʜᴍɪɴ ꜰʀɪᴇɴᴅ ᴡᴀᴛᴄʜ ᴏɴᴇ ᴄʟɪᴘ ᴡʜɪᴄʜ ᴏᴘᴇɴᴇᴅ ᴛʜᴇɪʀ ᴇʏᴇꜱ. ᴏɴ ᴛʜᴇ ᴏᴛʜᴇʀ ʜᴀɴᴅ, ᴀʏᴏᴅʜʏᴀ, ᴡʜɪᴄʜ ʜᴀᴅ ʟᴀɪᴅ ꜰʀᴏᴢᴇɴ ɪɴ ᴛɪᴍᴇ ꜱɪɴᴄᴇ ᴛʜᴇ ᴛɪᴍᴇ ᴏꜰ ᴛʀᴇᴛᴀ ʏᴜɢᴀ, ᴀꜰᴛᴇʀ ꜱʜʀɪ ʀᴀᴍᴀ'ꜱ ᴅᴇᴘᴀʀᴛᴜʀᴇ ꜱᴜᴅᴅᴇɴʟʏ ʙᴜꜱᴛʟᴇꜱ ᴡɪᴛʜ ʟɪꜰᴇ. 𝖂𝖍𝖆𝖙 𝖎𝖓 𝖙𝖍𝖊 𝖜𝖔𝖗𝖑𝖉 𝖜𝖆𝖘 𝖌𝖔𝖎𝖓𝖌 𝖔𝖓? 𝕽𝖊𝖆𝖉 𝖙𝖔 𝖋𝖎𝖓𝖉 𝖔𝖚𝖙!

what would happen if Kunti told Pandu about karna ,before Pandu's dead and he accepted karna as his eldest son ,but despite trying in every way ,karna could not be found by Pandu ,Kunti and Bhisma....and Pandu died. Will they ever be able to find the rightful heir of Hastinapur throne?!....read the story to find out. This is just a fanfiction and does not meant to hurt anyone's feelings or disrespect any person or religion, i apologise in advance if I unknowingly hurt someone. only story belongs to me. constructive criticism is appreciated.