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Of blood, roses, beauty and beasts par taint_of_gold
Of blood, roses, beauty and beasts
taint_of_gold
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"Now much is the life a single human being worth? ...If you had to weigh up the life of a stranger against that of your loved ones, your future and everything you own, would it really be right to spare it?" --- Born with the most beautiful face of a girl, Yuki Tatchibana has always been too gorgeous for his own good, pulling him into a world in which violence is the only way for him to earn the respect of others. Haunted by his deeds and torn between the responsibilities born from his past and his yearning for a fulfilling life, he meets the unsightly but loving Sakura, giving him hope to find a way out of the vicious lifecycle of a criminal.
Master's doll [𝐂𝐨𝐦𝐩𝐥𝐞𝐭𝐞𝐝] par RibbonsAndKnives
Master's doll [𝐂𝐨𝐦𝐩𝐥𝐞𝐭𝐞𝐝]
RibbonsAndKnives
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Follow Rea, a young boy whose face was as gorgeous as a doll. His whole being captivated a doll maker named Taurent Brialle and brought him in to live in his manor, however, his obsession with everything beautiful made the house feel similar to a prison. Nevertheless, Rea desired to devote his life to him as payment for the chance Taurent had given him to continue living. What can I do without you? You are the most beautiful creation I have - Taurent Brialle Are you really living or are you just a mere shell that is controlled by threads? - Haemi Kral Haemi Kral, a son of a lord who wanted to make friends with Rea, noticed something was off with the relationship between Rea and the doll maker. As a young boy filled with sunshine and justice, he wanted to bring Rea out of the world he was trapped in and live as a real person with his own mind and will. Rea was forced to choose whether to remain loyal to the master who saved him or to go along with the will to once again live as a human? A living doll was given the chance to think for himself whether to live an easy life or to strive in a world as a proper human. ✧✧✧ @value-yourself made the amazing cover. Go and check her out! @mkmac23 edited my story! #thecoronation #psychologicalnovelreads2020 #thrillerreads2020
Touch: Saving Ai | ✓ par JaxCreation
Touch: Saving Ai | ✓
JaxCreation
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[Vᴏʟᴜᴍᴇ 1 - Cᴏᴍᴘʟᴇᴛᴇ] Evelyn White was born with a gift - or rather, a curse: the first time she touches someone, she sees when and how that person dies. Meeting new people is sickening. Walking through a crowd is hell. Not to mention that when she opens her big mouth to tell people what's going to happen to them, most treat her like she's crazy - even after she saves their lives. But meddling with the future has consequences, and Death is not all there is to fear. As Evelyn races to find a way to save the new transfer student from being murdered, a voice starts whispering in her ear. Someone or something lurks in the shadows. Watching. Waiting. Trying to get close using mind games and tricks. It knows about her powers. It knows she can change Fate - and it's not alone. ------------------------------------------- This book is written in Australian English and uses British style grammar. Cover art and chapter illustrations by JaxCreation (WP) / jax-chan (dA) / @jaxchan.owo (instagram) / jax-chan.carrd.co. Do not repost or use without permission. 𝗖𝗼𝗺𝗽𝗹𝗲𝘁𝗲𝗱 𝘄𝗼𝗿𝗱 𝗰𝗼𝘂𝗻𝘁: ~32.5k words Featured on: • @WattpadUrbanFantasy: 'Dark as Death' - Nov 13, 2022 • @TeenFiction: 'Chills' - Aug 25, 2022 • @Mystery: 'The Sixth Sense' - Jul 27, 2022 • @Fright: 'Paranormal' - May 16, 2022 • @WackyWriters: 'Judge's Favourites' - May, 2022 • @Paranormal: 'After School' - Aug 28, 2021 • @Ghost: 'Die Young, Stay Pretty' - Apr 14, 2021 • @StoriesUndiscovered: 'In The Shadows' - Aug-Sep, 2020 • @PsychologicalNovel: 'Terrible Speculation' - Jun 16, 2020 • @anime: 'Light Novel' - Jun 6, 2020 • @YAMystery: 'Thriller' - Apr 26, 2020
A is For Arson: A Langley & Porter Mystery (FIRST FIVE CHAPTERS) par ANHorton1227
A is For Arson: A Langley & Porter Mystery (FIRST FIVE CHAPTERS)
ANHorton1227
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Alexander Langley wasn't looking for trouble but Charlotte Porter found him anyway. Only, this new partnership has them in over their heads and way before their time. 2020 WATTYS WINNER in MYSTERY The life of a poor merchant's daughter in Victorian Era London is quite boring. Charlotte Porter, it seems, is the exception. Desperate for a source of income once her father's gambling debts have drained their funds and placed them in the sights of some of London's most notorious criminals, Charlotte is in search of salvation. It comes in the form of handsome detective Alexander Langley, a curious gentleman with a strange connection to Scotland Yard and an even stranger connection to the American West. Charlotte soon finds herself swept into his world of investigation and intrigue. When a case of art theft turns into murder and she and Alexander are thrown into the seedy underbelly of the London elite, Charlotte realizes that the work isn't the only thing she's become attached to. But now, her father's powerful creditors are ready to close the books on them, and Charlotte must find a way to keep them out of the red because this time it won't be written in ink. Book 1 of the Langley & Porter Series *Featured on: The Wattpad Stars For Fans of Bridgerton List Wattpad's Strong Female Leads List @HistoricalFiction 's The Gothic List EDITOR'S PICK April 2021 Content warning: This story contains violence. **This is only the first five chapters. The rest of the book is available on Amazon for purchase and via KU.**